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Okayyyy, finally the page is here, as promised. I'm sorry it took me so long to post it ;;
So, we finally exit from Led and C.Y.'s past, and Led attempts to change the ominous subject by asking the grey wolf how they are going to find reinforcements.
This one... says something weird. Anyone knows what she's talking about? O.o
Also, they seem to hear others approaching, and C.Y. hides in a bush. I'm pretty sure you can understand why
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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That hour glass? I have this feeling there's way more too it
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Oh so many diffrent secrets and mysteries but that's what makes this comic so great to read
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She's like a rabbit with how quickly she hides O_o'
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Quelque chose me dit que le sablier a rapport avec ça ... x)
Aww pauvre CY. Mais bon ... à l'époque, elle était plus gênée de sa différence.
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hehehe some of the expressions you manage to draw are just priceless XD
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CY is like "Oh fuck no time to get my ass out of here!" XD
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Bellissima pagina, mi piacciono i pannelli centrali
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Poor C.Y. , it's her early times, she's still uncertain about meeting others :C
Or maybe her sense tells her it's the bad guys!
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That's right! She is still ashamed of her looks :C
Hoho maybe
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Uhmmm.... Is it one of the chakras? Dat would be coolio... or I'm getting it completely wrong xD Lol, I ish board...
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...does CY have such a short tail? didn't notice that on the ref sheet...
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Well her tail is indeed rather short, but in last panel, it was my mistake, I made it WAY too short XD I was afraid it would cover Led's face XD
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ah, got it. you could make it look like it's turned away from us a bit.
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I agree, I definitely should have XD
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I like, but if I were to change one thing, it might be shading and highlights to make the characters stand out a bit more from the background / look more like they are in shadow. For instance, the hourglass panel would have looked good if the far left had been slightly darker, on the opposite side from the lighting where the light wouldn't have been able to reach as much, or, if the light is coming more front on, then around the fur on that side. You have a nice highlight there but no shadows.
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Ah! Thank you so much for your great suggestion!
I agree with you, the shadows are very weak in these pages. The reason behind that is that I don't have a green pencil dark enough to make them stand out well XD I will make sure to fix that for the upcoming pages though, perhaps if I mix that green pencil with a darker tone like black or brown, the shadows will become bolder
Thank you a ton again!
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i'm sorry; you say you exited from their past, but is this page still a flashback? it just seems unclear, so idk if they're hiding from someone coming while they're dealing with getting the sword back, or if it's just after Led leaves his home!
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Ah, I'm sorry for the confusion! XD But yes, this is still a flashback
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ah okay! THANKS for explaining, that helps me understand it better :'D
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I have read the last two pages, in fact this entire story so far!
I'm saying this page in general is some what unclear; Idk if on this page, they've escaped from the flashback and are now in the present, or if their still in the past just after leaving Led's home and have run into someone new, which is why C.Y. hid (because back then she was much more timid). c:
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I have to agree... the Panel Borders are still emboldened... like she said they would be for the flashback period...
So if this was a page meaning to be the current page the panels should not have thick bold borders....
However, they seem to still have them (bold borders) Reading the last to pages helps some I agree to that.. but having the panel thickness right would be helpful all
the more...
Pardon my randomness.. & btw, I'm trying to understand the same thing is asking as I can see their point....
Plus I'm not meaning to argue either
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I don't know if it's just me but Led's forehead looks a bit small in the first panel
Other than that, very awesome
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You're right it is, my bad XD
Aww Thank you^^
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You're welcome
Keep up the awesome work
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