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Ask-Lumine [2014-03-31 15:38:23 +0000 UTC]
Insecteon sounds better.
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Ask-Lumine In reply to ARVEN92 [2014-04-01 02:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Make a poll and see who votes for which name!
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ARVEN92 In reply to Ask-Lumine [2014-04-06 11:33:49 +0000 UTC]
Good idea, I shall^^
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gozzy6 [2013-09-27 22:14:57 +0000 UTC]
i love it! it is fantastic! great drawing and you do very well while shading.
Β but for feedback keep on reading. if you dont want feedback, than dont. when i draw, i like feedback because i dont know what to fix if i dont know what is wrong.
do less. make it simple...er. my mind doesn't know if it wants to look at the huge tail, the black and yellow midsection, its mouth and pincers, its spikes on its legs, its wings, it exoskeleton armor or what. more is great but if you look at a pokemon, most of the good ones have a base of 2,3 or 4 colors.
try to keep it to a more basic scale and keep it under one idea, like honeybee. honeybees are fluffy and hard workers with lots of wits and have enough power to survive in the insect world but a little on the weaker side. make the wings shorter because you don't want to make it a flying type although want to keep the insect style. remove like half of the spikes. dont remove all of them but remove enough that you are not overwhelmed but keep enough to keep the bee kind of style. then make the tail shorter and remove the purple. (keep the stinger.) keep the stuff that make that makes this pokemon who it is and remove the things that are unessery. i would recommend using less colors like red and purple and keeping colors inside the range of darker green, lime green yellow and black.
i would show you mine (based off of a kinda grasshopper/scorpion type thing) but i don't have a camera. i am sorry if this os overwelming but sence you are the artist, you can pick what you lisen to and what edvice you use. if you dont want to use any of my advice i am completely fine with it.i am kinda attached to my eevee's as well.
have a good day ~gozzy
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ARVEN92 In reply to gozzy6 [2013-10-03 21:12:52 +0000 UTC]
My, thank you so much for taking your time to write this beautiful critique, I appreciate it a lot!
I agree with you fully, this pokemon should definitely be simpler in both design and colour palette. This is so old! I really need to upgrade Stingeon, for the sake of Bug-types! XD
I agree with making the colours duller and darker. I think basing the pokemon off a honeybee is a very interesting idea!Β
Your words gave me the motivation to re-draw this picture! I think I will be making a new Stingeon by following the advice you gave!
Truly thank you very much!
I would be very interested in seeing your own Fakemon, but it is alrightΒ about the camera, I understand. Β Β
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gozzy6 In reply to ARVEN92 [2014-01-28 17:52:39 +0000 UTC]
i am glad you appreciate the work i put into the review. i cant wait to see your new stingeon. upload it as soon as you get it done well.
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Christianathecat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-09-05 07:17:10 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe Eeveelutions freak alert XD
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Christianathecat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-09-21 01:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Whoop Dream and everything will be alright... for now
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Christianathecat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-09-24 07:05:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm from the future XD I know what's going to happen... But I can't tell you :/
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Christianathecat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-09-29 11:16:41 +0000 UTC]
I don't want to tell yours it's... it's...
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Christianathecat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-10-04 09:05:19 +0000 UTC]
Shh.... don't tell anyone I can read the future
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coopercoll [2013-05-09 23:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... I must honestly say, compared to your other Fakemons, I find this one less impressing. Mostly because of how much you put on it. There's a long purple stinger, a yellow and black striped body, mint-green legs with spikes, a green armor with red pinchers...
I would find it a better design if the armor was removed, the stinger was smaller and made a green or yellow colour.
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coopercoll In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-05-16 19:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you:3 I'm glad you didn't think I sounded mean...
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linkwolf998 [2013-04-28 02:34:09 +0000 UTC]
[link] Heres a image from the Fakemon game that you Fakemon will be in!
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ARVEN92 In reply to linkwolf998 [2013-04-29 14:37:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, that looks fantastic! I love how accurate it is! 8DDD Epic! <3
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