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lantairvlea In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-17 18:25:50 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome! I'd be happy to. I request a note when you put it up though, I have quite the back-log for deviations and, well, we still have dial-up too.
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lantairvlea In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-20 14:39:58 +0000 UTC]
It's not too bad. Encourages me to spend less time on the computer *laughs.*
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lantairvlea In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-22 12:39:01 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha, you'd just have to find something more constructive to do while waiting for stuff to load *grin.*
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lantairvlea [2009-04-07 17:23:03 +0000 UTC]
Consider this a place-holder for a thorough critique and redline to come if you still want one.
I do have a question: What type of background do you intend on doing or will you just be doing the characters?
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Aryenne In reply to lantairvlea [2009-04-08 00:35:52 +0000 UTC]
The background will be pretty simple. The original was a grass hill and a twilight sky (black fading into blue at the horizon). I will probably do something similar, but I might do an afternoon sky too. Suggestions?
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lantairvlea In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-08 14:36:06 +0000 UTC]
I think either would work, but you might want to consider what mood you want the image to have. Night (and twilight) tends to be more calm as it dominates with blue and other cool tones. When you say afternoon are you thinking sunset or just bright, clear sky?
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Volpone [2009-04-02 16:22:19 +0000 UTC]
make the bird a fantasy colored heron or something, herons are cool and lend well to fantasy. maybe rotate that hind leg, the far one, so it's facing more foreward, you have it where it looks like it's completely to the side, but the rest of the horse is very much at a foreward angle., flatten the center of the chest, arch the shouler at a higher point. don't know if that makes any sense or helps at all but...eh.... nice piece though.
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Volpone In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-03 06:04:11 +0000 UTC]
ill be waiting for it ^_^
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LadyEdana [2009-03-31 02:30:11 +0000 UTC]
I think the horse has been covered pretty well. Looking at the bird it looks like the left wing is a little shorted then the left. Maybe there more of a bend then I'm seeing?
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LadyEdana In reply to Aryenne [2009-03-31 23:04:09 +0000 UTC]
That's what I thought.
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snolasriahdame In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-05 17:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Yikess! Wow, Oh yeah, I know what you mean. I'm probably going to have to go through mine soon. I didn't check my deviantart for a week once, I had over 400 devaitions. o.o It was crazyyyy
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snolasriahdame In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-06 02:01:54 +0000 UTC]
True. Oh my gooodness.
Holy smokes! Good luck with that! When I had so many, I just selected ALL of them and deleted. cause I was wayyy to tired to try and get through all of them. xP
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snolasriahdame In reply to Aryenne [2009-04-06 02:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha. Well, eventually, it might get to way to much to handle. I highly suggest parousing [sp?!] the deviations, picking out the ones you want a better look at, and then deleting the rest. XP
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HeatherHitchman [2009-03-31 00:19:34 +0000 UTC]
i love the bird, the movement looks very natural, however the front legs / chest on the horse looks a little stiff. but other than that it looks really good!
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Aryenne In reply to HeatherHitchman [2009-04-01 02:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks to some good tips, I'm just about there, I think!
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shannonlauriston [2009-03-30 23:45:48 +0000 UTC]
The only thing I'm bothered by is the right foreleg of the horse, it should be a bit further back on the shoulder a bit. I really like it though
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CozmicDreamer [2009-03-30 14:53:03 +0000 UTC]
I agree...That right front is bugging me. That is a tough 3/4 angle and it should be slightly foreshortened. From that angle, the muscle shouldn't be so pronounced since the bulk of it is on the outside of the horses leg. There should be some great refs from He has many photos of his equines in animated poses.
The back hinds are perfect!
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