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Published: 2009-06-23 13:00:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 3529; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 44
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Finally! They just need to talk it out. Let it out, it'll feel better after.
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Oh yeah .. 
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Hm, the fop-girl is still alive. How disappointing.
I find it hard to believe Severus would speak so openly about Lily when he's so adamant about hiding it from everyone except Dumbles. If fop-girl doesn't keep quiet (and why should she, since she hates Sev), Snape's true loyalties will be exposed and Snape will be dead.
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The story takes place several years after the first fall of the Dark Lord, so his 'true' loyalities may be hidden easily behind those to Dumbledore, and, of course, I think if you're keeping a secret over a very long time, a bitter and dark secret, it must be relieving of some sort to tell it to someone feeling something equal (at least Ferocian is a step further than him at this moment in getting on with the grief). Maybe he's a strong person, the one that is able to keep quiet over a long time, but he's just a human as we all are, and if there's a small chance that he's giving in the wish to talk about Lily this story is possible.
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Lol reading, "I was Dumbledore's man!", makes me think he was going to break out into, "I was Dumbledores man, dawg! We was tight!"
Haha still a great comic though (: I love it.
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*smiles* thank you ... ^^ glad you like it. And I hope Snape will never say something like 'we was tight' ...
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Haha yeah I bet. It just made me laugh, but I loved it for everything else too!
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Ohh, the tension is just palpable. Nice development.
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*smiles* I guess it wasn't the thing many readers thought of ^^
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I second what cthathem said
Although I have to admit that it bothers me a bit that Snape says "You don't know nothing". He doesn't seem to be the kind of character who'd use double negation, even when highly agitated...
But aside from that small nitpick this page turned out brilliant again. And wee, the plot thickens...
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Mhh ... I chose this sentence for it's sound (I try to read out loud every sentence I use for the story to hear if they sound good in english) - it spoken fast it has a very snakeish sound, and so Snape got his text line.
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It may have a snakeish sound, but it's still ungrammatical in modern English
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Really? Ok .. I think my english needs modern polish^^
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also ich müsste ja sowieso alle faven...
ich pack sowas nicht; und bin schon allein deswegen echt sehr beeindruckt!
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*lächelt* naja dann hat sich die Zeit, die drinsteckt, ein bisschen gelohnt. Mit dieser speziellen Seite bin ich persönlich zwar noch nicht so ganz zufrieden, aber ... wenigstens stimmt sie für die Story. ^^ Ich hoffe, ich schaffe die Qualität mal bei einer eigenen Welt, nicht nur als Fanart ...
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du kriegst das sicher hin! ... ich bewunder das wirklich, dass du so fleißig dran bist. ich bin ja sehr, sehr faul geworden.
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Naja geht so ^^ ich lass mir zwischen den einzelnen Seiten zum colorieren auch einfach zuviel Zeit
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