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Published: 2005-12-23 22:23:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1494; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 138
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Still nothing from me right now, I've been too sick to even think about writing or anything else...but did this for my poem When I Look In The Mirror... Thanks sweetie, I love it
When I look in the mirror,
I hate what I see
I don't know the person
Who looks back at me
She's a monster, a freak,
Pathetic, and weak
A selfish, dirty,
little whore
Who's cheap and tainted
to the core
When I look in the mirror,
I hate what I see
I can't stand the stranger
who looks back at me
I see the madness in her eyes,
I know the secrets under her skin,
I have her scars, I speak her lies,
I feel the pain she holds within,
I see her blackened,
Bloodshot eyes,
I hear her desperate
Inner cries,
I see the fear,
I know she's breaking,
I wear the smiles
She's always faking
Do I deserve this?
What have I done,
To be this monster
I've become?
When I look in the mirror,
I hate what I see
This distorted reflection...
How can it be me?
Comments: 24
great imagery of emotions.. i really like it ^_^
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i hope this isnt you...if so, do yourself a favor and break the mirror...haha. but seriously, i like the poem. i loved it the whole way thru.
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i really love the poem!! and the picture lol, its scary hehehe..i like dem both but the poem just blows it away!!
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i really love this you did an amazing job 
i know i can relate to it.. at least once or twice in this
drama infused teenage saga
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That's powerful. and it gets stronger with every line. Feel better sweetie. . . but meanwhile, beautiful catharsis.
PS: the image perfectly describes it.
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It reminds me of the begining of the movie Saw II..Wonderful editing.
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Awesome, both the image and the poem are great
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you're the best Ash, 
I miss you baby, I need hear something about you, please Ash take care ok?
...& Merry Xmas sweetie
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It has been SOOOOO long since I talked to you! How have you been? I've been busy, but I've been ok.
What's new with you??? I miss you
~ash
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Awesome and beautiful
Hope you feel better dear
I wish you the best for the coming new year
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