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Bang bang
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Published: 2011-03-26 06:31:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 12809; Favourites: 560; Downloads: 250
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No idea where this came from, but it was a lot of fun to draw.Color it if you'd like, but credit if you do.
The speed lines are from [link]
Edit: A DD! Wow! Really, really didn't expect that. Thank you to everyone who have added it as a favorite and thanks to FantasyStock for the recommendation!
Updated to include the PSD. Enjoy!
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Congratulations on this Daily Deviation! You're been featured in the following article: May 2011 Resources DD Summary
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damn... you ever think about making a comic series?
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also. this seems much more american then your other works.
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american comic books I mean.
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I ADORE the perspective on this, plus the simple yet detailed work!
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I really like it, I colored it, but I had a hard time, anyway here it is: [link]
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Ty... you're art is so pretty!
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Great action in this pose, obtained very well! congratulations!!
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Gran acciรณn en esta pose, muy bien lograda!
felicitaciones!!
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Sweet belt buckle XD Haha, anyway, awesome art
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LOL both stock and picture got DDs in the same day xDD
congratulations 83
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Haha... awesome... that's an odd coincidence, don't you think?
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"I don't trade my sandwich for anything less than a cook AND a juice box!" *bang*
I just love this. It leaves a lot to the imagination. *faves*
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I love the style, and all the details-the juice box, the belt, the goggles...
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Yowza! Dem lines! Awesome job on this- it has an epic manga feel to it
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Dunno what it is about this picture, but it makes me laugh. Maybe it's the expression on the face, maybe it's the belt buckle... Either way, great job! XD
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I think this could do with a redraw, if I'm gonna be totally honest. The focus should be on the gun, but with your composition, it's more focussed toward her right leg. The fluttering of her coat only enhances this, as it draws the eye toward her leg. It also doesn't help that, with the perspective used, the leg is drawn larger than the gun, while the gun itself is sort of squashed into the upper left.
Not only that, but the numerous, static lines on the inside of her jacket make it feel a flat board, rather than a coat billowing in three dimensions. Your shading elsewhere on her body flows with the shapes of the object (her breasts, legs, hands, feet, etc.), but the shading of the jacket doesn't follow its curves. There are no highlights, only spotted blacks and a whole mess of vertical lines.
Lastly, if the gun is being fired twice ('Bang bang'), there should be some sort of recoil. That would make the piece all the more dynamic -- to be able to see the force of a firearm. Even though it's a fun drawing, it still ought to obey the laws of physics. Simply putting a bit of muzzle flash in there and a couple sound effects cues does little to show the full power of a gun.
All in all, it's a nice piece, but essentially flawed. If you really want to make it pop, pull her left leg back, put greater emphasis on the gun, and lose some of the awkward-looking 'shading' on the coat. Then you'll have a winner.
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I don't disagree with any particular thing you said, but I don't think I'm going to redraw it. This was just a fun piece that sort of happened. It is how it is and I'm glad that people seem to enjoy it as well. So, I think I'll just let it be.
I do appreciate your well rounded comment, though!
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Haha, no problem. Sorry if I came off a bit harsh; I tend to really get going with little regard to how it's coming out.
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Ah, I guess some might have been offended, but I see where you're coming from. A wholesome critique is good for ya now and again. Besides, you made a bunch of good points. So... not harsh, just straightforward!
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Right on. And believe me, I ain't perfect either. I tend to use critiques as a means of thinking about my own work at the same time.
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Sorry, I meant to say 'right leg' in that final paragraph, not left.
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cool
PS you could use a Creative commons license, if you'd like to make the drawing available also for coloring, if you like it! you even help the one who searches deviant art by license
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