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AsherMane β€” Alone In Silence
Published: 2014-10-12 21:34:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 336; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description I pace the halls in my mind,
The corridors of thought.
Passing rooms filled with dreams,
yet all remain locked.
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Comments: 38

Spinning-Jenny [2014-10-20 13:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous, gorgeous work you have here. Β 

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AsherMane In reply to Spinning-Jenny [2014-10-20 13:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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EnchantmeCosplay [2014-10-19 21:20:00 +0000 UTC]

You should write a book! This is beautiful.

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AsherMane In reply to EnchantmeCosplay [2014-10-19 21:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you maybe one day ill compile my works into a book.... maybe

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ohbeautifuldelilah [2014-10-19 17:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Lovely imagery Short but definitely striking.Β 

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AsherMane In reply to ohbeautifuldelilah [2014-10-19 17:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much Β 

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ohbeautifuldelilah In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-20 05:45:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Skye-42 [2014-10-18 00:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I need to watch you. I love your poetry.

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AsherMane In reply to Skye-42 [2014-10-18 00:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much please Β do

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Skye-42 In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-18 00:42:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^^

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becauseImhiding [2014-10-17 16:37:01 +0000 UTC]

horribly accurate, this is awesome....

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AsherMane In reply to becauseImhiding [2014-10-17 16:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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bugs-one [2014-10-17 12:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Simple, short and so much meaning.

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AsherMane In reply to bugs-one [2014-10-17 21:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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JA-Lashley [2014-10-15 22:17:39 +0000 UTC]

This has some much meaning, Love It

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AsherMane In reply to JA-Lashley [2014-10-15 22:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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Khadidja-boo [2014-10-15 17:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Short yet expressive. Great job!

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AsherMane In reply to Khadidja-boo [2014-10-15 17:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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comatose-comet [2014-10-15 12:51:20 +0000 UTC]

for something so short, you say so much wonderful work

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AsherMane In reply to comatose-comet [2014-10-15 12:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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comatose-comet In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-15 12:56:32 +0000 UTC]

no problem - I love checking out other writers' work

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TehSweetheart [2014-10-15 01:51:58 +0000 UTC]

So simple and yet so well written. Just wonderful!

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AsherMane In reply to TehSweetheart [2014-10-15 01:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so so much

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TehSweetheart In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-15 01:56:58 +0000 UTC]

You are more than welcome! (:

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psycocat [2014-10-14 17:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.Β  This feels like a Persian poem.

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AsherMane In reply to psycocat [2014-10-14 17:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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draconiclight831 [2014-10-14 02:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Jam packed with power :3

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AsherMane In reply to draconiclight831 [2014-10-14 02:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]

That's amazing! You have wonderful ability. :3

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AsherMane In reply to AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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AskFallensky In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 01:31:14 +0000 UTC]

If I don't leave a comment on your other poems, it's because I don't know what to say. It's too amazing for words. :3

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AsherMane In reply to AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh thank you that's the best comment you could leave right there!

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AskFallensky In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 01:40:00 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome! I believe you've inspired me to write my own poems. You're magnificent (I used a different adjective thereΒ  Β 

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AsherMane In reply to AskFallensky [2014-10-14 01:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Thats so cool send me a watch and i'll do the same so I can see your upcoming poems!

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AskFallensky In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 01:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay! :3

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Eagles-Rise [2014-10-14 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]

I can clearly visualize this in my head, you've got such visualization and power packed into such a small, straight to the point piece. Amazing job, I'm sure many people can relate, I know I can.Β 

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AsherMane In reply to Eagles-Rise [2014-10-14 00:08:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, several people have complimented my ability with imagery.

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Eagles-Rise In reply to AsherMane [2014-10-14 00:14:24 +0000 UTC]

As they should, you've got great skill with it.Β 

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