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Published: 2005-06-05 21:22:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1225; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 51
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~ Deaths Orgasm ~


The sweet essence of him rolls off my wet and hungered tongue.
My teeth penetrate his mortal flesh deeper till I can go no more.
I told him to turn away from my sight before all this begun.
Now I allow my evil to seep into him to the very core.

My throat burns with extreme pleasure from his blood following into me.
I pull him harder and press my nails deep enjoying his pleas and screams.
I laugh to my self as I lay him on the floor and now watch him bleed.
I lay on top of him rubbing his blood on my body as I orgasm feeling myself drift into the same dream.

I moan and arch my back as i fuck you while watching you slowly die.
This is always what you wanted to be embraced by the most lovely of all deaths.
I orgasm again seeing the fear in your eyes as you struggle beneath me, I love how you try.
Tell me my love, what dose it feel like knowing your going to die and taking your last breath?

I see your breathing becoming faint, your time has finally come my dear.
I sink my teeth into your white flesh once more, I want to feel your soul scream.
I look back into your dead eyes seeing myself as if in a mirror.
I lean over and now kiss your dead lips as I close your eyes, your even more gorgeous dead to me it seems.


By: Ashlie Dawn Gillis

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Comments: 44

Stefymoondust [2012-03-26 19:27:07 +0000 UTC]

great flow, I like it so much!!!

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AshlieNelson In reply to Stefymoondust [2012-03-26 19:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you hon

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Stefymoondust In reply to AshlieNelson [2012-03-26 19:31:03 +0000 UTC]

you are so welcome, I expect more of your writing

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minminmeimei [2009-03-29 14:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!!

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spazy1 [2007-01-24 22:49:59 +0000 UTC]

im lovin that

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AshlieNelson In reply to spazy1 [2007-02-01 02:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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spazy1 In reply to AshlieNelson [2007-02-01 06:32:00 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

ur polite

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Kathars1s [2006-11-13 23:54:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

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AshlieNelson In reply to Kathars1s [2006-12-10 19:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Jasiven [2006-08-10 05:09:11 +0000 UTC]

I don't myself find it cheesy, I find it... snuffy.

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AshlieNelson In reply to Jasiven [2006-09-04 00:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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godesofthedark [2006-01-10 14:54:21 +0000 UTC]

there really isnt much to say but WOW

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AshlieNelson In reply to godesofthedark [2006-01-14 09:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Hitooou [2005-08-16 17:19:55 +0000 UTC]

great job!

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AshlieNelson In reply to Hitooou [2005-08-17 13:32:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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My-Hazey-Clarity [2005-07-04 01:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Really wonderful!

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AshlieNelson In reply to My-Hazey-Clarity [2005-07-06 16:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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Heidi-V-Art [2005-06-24 06:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poem! I agree it is intense!

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AshlieNelson In reply to Heidi-V-Art [2005-06-28 07:45:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you doll!

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MissM69 [2005-06-15 03:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmmmmm that was most intense

For being so young when you wrote this you did great I like it

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AshlieNelson In reply to MissM69 [2005-06-17 05:40:12 +0000 UTC]

I doubt my poetry would be much better now though

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MissM69 In reply to AshlieNelson [2005-06-17 11:35:47 +0000 UTC]

Makes you wish you could turn back time

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kasag [2005-06-07 06:41:21 +0000 UTC]

great work dear

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AshlieNelson In reply to kasag [2005-06-07 20:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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xBloodyCupcakex [2005-06-06 22:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I loved it. Amazing job. <3

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AshlieNelson In reply to xBloodyCupcakex [2005-06-06 23:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Thankies

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Space7Witch [2005-06-06 17:24:48 +0000 UTC]

wooo, did it just get hot in here or what?
:-p

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AshlieNelson In reply to Space7Witch [2005-06-06 23:38:45 +0000 UTC]

I thought you would like that one

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Space7Witch In reply to AshlieNelson [2005-06-07 00:23:37 +0000 UTC]

damn straight woman.

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Codename-46 [2005-06-06 16:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Never play with a vampire.... he didn't heed your warning and now look where he is.
Very interesting piece.

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AshlieNelson In reply to Codename-46 [2005-06-06 23:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. glad you liked it

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Msubrosa [2005-06-06 13:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmm! I like!

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AshlieNelson In reply to Msubrosa [2005-06-06 23:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Bloodredsangre [2005-06-06 07:22:18 +0000 UTC]

So vicious! I love it. I can seen some teen angst in there but mostly it hold up. I am not crazy about poetry that rhymes but I stayed with this one all the way through.

Good job!

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AshlieNelson In reply to Bloodredsangre [2005-06-06 11:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks sweety

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ElectronicFox [2005-06-06 04:08:01 +0000 UTC]

wow. amazing. i like it! ^ ^

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AshlieNelson In reply to ElectronicFox [2005-06-06 04:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Glad you liked it

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lirit-arnauld [2005-06-05 22:30:26 +0000 UTC]

I've never actually come across something like this... Nicely done...

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AshlieNelson In reply to lirit-arnauld [2005-06-05 22:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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MorgaineLeFey [2005-06-05 22:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Wowwwwwwwww

Im so inlove with it I felt it all, uau, you are so awsome, i just love it!
I have no words for it...It totally deserves a

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AshlieNelson In reply to MorgaineLeFey [2005-06-05 22:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much doll. That means alot to me

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Emanaia [2005-06-05 21:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Well this is definitely intense

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AshlieNelson In reply to Emanaia [2005-06-05 21:34:03 +0000 UTC]

I got morbid at a young age.

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Emanaia In reply to AshlieNelson [2005-06-05 22:10:37 +0000 UTC]

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