Comments: 44
Stefymoondust [2012-03-26 19:27:07 +0000 UTC]
great flow, I like it so much!!!
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Stefymoondust In reply to AshlieNelson [2012-03-26 19:31:03 +0000 UTC]
you are so welcome, I expect more of your writing
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spazy1 [2007-01-24 22:49:59 +0000 UTC]
im lovin that
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spazy1 In reply to AshlieNelson [2007-02-01 06:32:00 +0000 UTC]
your welcome
ur polite
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Kathars1s [2006-11-13 23:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow!
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Jasiven [2006-08-10 05:09:11 +0000 UTC]
I don't myself find it cheesy, I find it... snuffy.
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godesofthedark [2006-01-10 14:54:21 +0000 UTC]
there really isnt much to say but WOW
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kasag [2005-06-07 06:41:21 +0000 UTC]
great work dear
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xBloodyCupcakex [2005-06-06 22:25:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I loved it. Amazing job. <3
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Codename-46 [2005-06-06 16:27:08 +0000 UTC]
Never play with a vampire.... he didn't heed your warning and now look where he is.
Very interesting piece.
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Msubrosa [2005-06-06 13:55:41 +0000 UTC]
Mmmmmmm! I like!
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Bloodredsangre [2005-06-06 07:22:18 +0000 UTC]
So vicious! I love it. I can seen some teen angst in there but mostly it hold up. I am not crazy about poetry that rhymes but I stayed with this one all the way through.
Good job!
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ElectronicFox [2005-06-06 04:08:01 +0000 UTC]
wow. amazing. i like it! ^ ^
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lirit-arnauld [2005-06-05 22:30:26 +0000 UTC]
I've never actually come across something like this... Nicely done...
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