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Published: 2013-02-12 16:08:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 391; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 6
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These were for a contest but I didnt win so now these mares are up for adoption.1
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Since my ratings are always twisted on fanart, I can never really give them high vision or originality ratings because they're not really original; especially when it's a character with no sort of story. The critique is going to be a little critical, but this is much better than I could ever do. I'm going to critique them 1) and 2) because I think they deserve to be critiques differently.
1) I love the colours of this one, the technique is very good. The scheme is nice, as you kept it simple and it worked. My faults with the colouring is that there are a few shadows in incorrect places; it's quite hard to work out where your light-source is. The face is very good, as is the cutie mark, and it puts a nice aspect on my little pony. However, your leg anatomy is a bit wrong on the legs behind, I'm no biologist but one just looks a bit bigger due to perspective. Overall, nice work.
2) The wings... so cute. This is probably what's classed as a more typical MLP fanart due to the position and face, so I can't really give it a very high originality rating. Of course, the leg patterns and colours are very unique so that makes up for that. The technique is very good, the legs are a little long, but other than that, very well done.
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I love this! It is quiet unique and cute! Though, in my opinion, the legs are a bit long, but I lover everything else! Like how you shaded, and used nice colors on the first to make it look more real. The second on it cute too, cartoonish and a very original design! The vary of wings is nice to see, not all the same e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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