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Published: 2013-06-04 17:23:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 727; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 3
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Another point commission asked by to draw Rainbow Dash.I think she turned out ok.
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I'm generally rather picky, just as a forewarning, so this may not be entirely accurate, and I'm sorry for that, I'm doing my best.
All in all this is a very basic image, with no explicitly detailed points or action, and I respect that, although I personally prefer more action-based pieces of art.
I'll start with the Pros, just because I'm [20&] cool[er] like that.
Her physique is nice, and nothing is ridiculously out of proportion, with I DEFINITELY appreciate. Too many people out there make females' waists the size of toothpicks, and I can't say that I like that.
The background, while simple, is pretty cool-looking, and it adds an almost softer appeal to it, as if you could run your hands over her arm and feel soft and fuzzy fur.
The hair is nicely drawn, and the technique definitely suits it.
All-in-all it's rather nice looking.
HOWEVER.
The Cons.
The first Con I noticed was that the legs are not even. The "kneeline," if you will, is not linear, and the right thigh is thicker than the left.
It is difficult to tell if she actually has breasts. The shape indicates it, but there is no lighting, lines, or shading to provide the idea of breasts.
The lighting/shading could be a little better as well. It is varying between leg to leg and wing to wing, and it kind of throws the viewer off a little on which direction the light is actually coming from.
I'm not sure if this is an actual Con, but I'll stick it out there anyways. The ear looks a little too pointy, and the other, in my mind, should be visible poking up above her forelock. It could be a personal preference, I don't know.
Her right wing looks nice, but her left wing is a little off. It appears to be slightly bent downwards, and it's longer and slightly skinnier than the right.
The shorts also seem to be slightly unsymmetrical. The right leg's hem is nicely done, but the left is differently angled and thus kind of odd to look at them both together.
I am aware this may not be a very popular critique. I'm putting this out here to help point out places to improve, like my Dad did for me. So yay. My first critique. B]
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