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Published: 2013-01-06 23:40:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 4002; Favourites: 93; Downloads: 21
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I drew this in a Livestream!I hope you like it!
art (c)
EDIT: I FIXED THE FLAMES I think I over did it actually...
Flame Pack (c) [link] *MD-Arts
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First thing: eyes hurt. You did a great job on the surroundings, maybe even over did it. The fire is too bright, making it hard to look at the art for a long period of time. And it's also quite Chaotic. It's hard to focus on Lloyd, since you covered 1/5 of him with the flames. The writings are quite hard to focus on, too. One can easily tell you work hard on the surroundings, but in the end, everyone will look away from the moniter light. That's why There's one and a half star missing.
Second, It is nice to see that you mixed the green uniform with the golden one, and the coloring is fine. But! Lloyd's nose seems to be too long, and his expression in boring. His shoulders are also a bit too high, making it look unnatural. Nice touch on the left eye, by the way.
To wrap it up: Splendid yet chaotic Background, natural coloring, unnatural body, and NINJAGO!!
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This.
This is an awesome representation of Lloyd's abilities, and what he can do now. (Sorry bad wording e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
I love how you drew his expression, mainly because I think during the time when he was fighting, the only thing he could truly be was serious. I love how you split up the color on his ninja suit so half is green half is gold. It shows the two powerful sides of him that he had gained since seeing the ninja.
However..maybe you did a bit too much on the flames? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
That's all I could think of that's bad... Maybe just the flames on the front though.
Other than that, awesome job!~
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cool! luv how half is light and the othr green.
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This SHOULD have more than 30 something faves~
Will write a critique on this soon~
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Oh shit, really???
I was hoping to fix the flames and re-upload it! Give me a little more time pleasee D:
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I will!~
I'm exactly quite busy my self now, I was going to do a critique tomorrow, heh heh
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I actually just finished it, so you can go check it out if you want again XD I think I over did it a bit...
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uHH...
DiD I BRaKe YOu???
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Ok let me just say I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! U did an amazing job
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