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Coatl-buddy [2007-11-30 01:37:18 +0000 UTC]

It's really great, the line art is so clean, wat do you use?
Now for critique, this is for your own good so don't hate:
the tips of the hair has no direction, by that I mean that I can't tell what direction the hair is flowing.
TIP: even though her hair is straight, curve it closer to the direction she is coming from or the wind is blowing.
her eyes are great but slant too far up. I don't hate that at all because the angle of the haed matches the angle of the eyes.
try adding a lil shoulder mustle on the arm that's moving foward to give it a better look, as if it's moving toward you.
The breast are good, especially since her top doesn't really define curves that much anyway.

But It's still reall good compare to me. You got a good grasp at anatomy. And you do Sakura justice.

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