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Published: 2009-10-15 01:03:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 591; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 12
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Description written from the heart-

It tricks you into wanting it
Deceives you through your heart
And just when you believe in it
It rips your soul apart

It tears through your flesh
Like worms through soil
Makes your life one of misery
And creates so much turmoil

This horror has no physical form
Yet everyone knows it's name
The horror's name is LOVE
And we're all just pawns in its twisted little game

the revised poem of mine. Now with a background!!! (oh joy)
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Comments: 34

ShinyWish [2010-05-09 04:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written.

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assassin4 In reply to ShinyWish [2010-05-10 07:56:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ShinyWish In reply to assassin4 [2010-05-10 14:08:21 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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Miss--Moore [2010-05-07 07:26:05 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this. Awesome work

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assassin4 In reply to Miss--Moore [2010-05-07 07:33:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Miss--Moore In reply to assassin4 [2010-05-07 13:21:44 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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brunette-from-oz [2010-04-28 08:30:40 +0000 UTC]

That's spot on , I reckon.
A pity that love and sex get so muddled up when they are so disparate!

Well, love is a concept, I think.

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assassin4 In reply to brunette-from-oz [2010-04-28 17:59:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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D44T [2010-04-26 14:40:27 +0000 UTC]

so deep and intense.. and so true, i love it!

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assassin4 In reply to D44T [2010-04-26 14:44:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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GothHazzz [2010-04-22 07:44:30 +0000 UTC]

<3
Love it.

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assassin4 In reply to GothHazzz [2010-04-22 14:45:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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davejsy [2010-04-08 21:20:50 +0000 UTC]

a cool unfortunately very true poem!!

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assassin4 In reply to davejsy [2010-04-09 06:54:31 +0000 UTC]

damn it that was supposed to be a

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assassin4 In reply to davejsy [2010-04-09 06:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :0

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midnightdream2 [2010-03-05 21:46:09 +0000 UTC]

hi this is awesom .. any way makes no since asking the same question as huntress(shes my sister) lol ..this looks amazing

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assassin4 In reply to midnightdream2 [2010-03-05 23:32:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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huntress-kaller [2010-03-05 19:31:15 +0000 UTC]

it looks awsome how'd you do it ???????????but i love it

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assassin4 In reply to huntress-kaller [2010-03-05 23:31:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks I wrote the poem after getting dumped, then took a photo of mine, brought it into photoshop, darkened it, and then added the border, and everything else.

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huntress-kaller In reply to assassin4 [2010-04-07 17:57:39 +0000 UTC]

cool sory for the late response

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assassin4 In reply to huntress-kaller [2010-04-07 20:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Damn that IS late! But don't worry about it . To tell you the truth, I wasn't even expecting a response.

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huntress-kaller In reply to assassin4 [2010-04-11 23:04:40 +0000 UTC]

ok still sorry

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kiwi-damnation [2010-02-24 14:25:27 +0000 UTC]

And good poem btw

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assassin4 In reply to kiwi-damnation [2010-02-24 17:21:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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kiwi-damnation In reply to assassin4 [2010-02-24 22:14:47 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure .

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kiwi-damnation [2010-02-24 14:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Love is more than hatred,
Which slices at your soul,
And leaves you tattered, battered -bruised,
Without a hand to hold.

Hate's cold negating winters,
That freeze your whole insides,
Leave nothing but a vacuum,
Of anger, pain and pride.

But love is all that's shining,
The early morning sun,
Revealing all that's perfect,
The light in everyone.

Perhaps love takes some chances,
Maybe the risks can fail,
At least we all have lived a day,
And seen what life entails.

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assassin4 In reply to kiwi-damnation [2010-02-24 17:21:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm speechless...

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kiwi-damnation In reply to assassin4 [2010-02-24 21:42:50 +0000 UTC]

I didn't want to seem so forward but I wanted to give you a gift of sorts... you know?

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assassin4 In reply to kiwi-damnation [2010-02-24 21:47:29 +0000 UTC]

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MP08SMP [2010-02-20 20:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Very good and quite moving

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assassin4 In reply to MP08SMP [2010-02-20 23:43:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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AccidentlyInspired [2010-02-05 17:04:13 +0000 UTC]

very cool poem^.^ nice rhyme scheme^.^

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assassin4 In reply to AccidentlyInspired [2010-02-05 17:10:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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AccidentlyInspired In reply to assassin4 [2010-02-05 17:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!!

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