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assiah — On the other side of the page
Published: 2003-06-27 08:25:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1842; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 168
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Poem is copyright my Nee-chan, Hokuto .Sometimes
I put my hand to my face
And there are tears I didn’t expect
Rising up like springs
And spilling over into my palm.
Sometimes
I put my hand to my face
And there is a drought
Where I expected showers
Of rain.
I know
There is nothing I can do
That changes anything
And you will always be
One step away
On the other side of the page.
Good night and I love you and I love you.
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Comments: 27
I have no words... The drawing is great, and what u have written...
*Clapping clapping*
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wow, it's really great... altough it would be better with eyes^^...
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OMG!!!!!! THAT IS REALLY COOL!!!!!!!! i hope all the deviants are as wonderful an artist as you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ++++++FAV
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o.o!! such beautiful coloring and the writing/poem..soo touching and beautiful..you truly are amazing!! *hugglesnuggles* i love the layers and ooo...you are just sugoi!
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*sigh* so pretty....*dee gets a dreamy far off look in her eyes*
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Wow! How beautiful! So simple, clean, smooth... wonderful! Great persective and coloring to boot!
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This is absolutely gorgeous! The pose is fantastic and I love his coat. Beautiful poem.
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This is such a nice piece of work. ^^ The art really fits the poem, and the mood is very fragile and melancholy .. It's very nice! I like it!
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love the pic man, it realy protrays your freinds poem very well. I love the brush work in the backgroun, it brings the pic to life and gives it a loved look.
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Nice.
The poem does fit the image. Kudos to my neechan on her poetic-ness. Anyhow, what can I tell you that you don't already know? You know what I think of your art.
As long as you draw men, it's fine.
*grins evilly*
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oooooo yay u uploaded... i love the pose and coat.. and also the hair and the colors........ very pretty bg and i love the use of brushes..... really nice poem too..... awesome job to ya both hehe
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You finished it! ^_^ *beams* The poem and the font you chose really fit this piece well. Your lines are incredibly clean... ^^ And I still adore the way you draw hair. *pet* Wonderful job--
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hello your work is very very good keep it up & ill be look foward to seeing more of your artwork
so bye for now
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I like the subtle use of brushes. o.o
And.....ooh, pretty man.
Awesome poem too...you said it was by Hokuto? ^o^!
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damn i wish i could draw hair and clothing as well as you.
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amazing work ;^; lovely poem and chara.....so...beautiful
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That was the most beautiful poem, and this is the most gorgeous picture to compliment it. I love how you can't see his eyes...wai, this rules.
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wow this is so pretty I like how everything flows and the poem is great.
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This is really, really beautiful, and as the above poster said, the art suits the poem. It's actually quite rare that soft shading fits in so well on an anime-style figure. Really liking the script in the backround too, I would have never thought of something like that
I'm faving this firstly because it's a great peice, and secondly because it really strikes a cord with me tonight...
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That is so elegant- wonderful. There is a real delicacy and fragility about this piece- really suits the poem. The only criticism I'd have is the shadow on the face from the hair- I don't think it's dark enough to totally hide his eyes from us. Unless he's not supposed to have eyes @_@. But, I still really like it- soft and muted with a bold statement.
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