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Atalix — I always need you by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-03-15 04:57:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1127; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description I love the smell of fresh water, the taste, the feel of it. Holding you closely, as we drift where ever the moving water takes us.
When first lay eyes on you, I never saw such a rare and beautiful aquatic being. You're a fresh water, you're different, that's what caught my attention. An EEL, I felt strange when I first made physical contact with you. You're delicate as I am, and your body is very strong as I am. I couldn't stop thinking about you, I only think of one person who's part of my life I chose. I did not expect it, I did not think my life will evolve into something beautiful than dangerous.
When we finally became one, I felt so emotionally full, of happiness, sensation and complete I ever imagined of. I didn't thought I needed you most.
I'm so yours. -Atalix


This art work is made by me (c) Atalix Ruben S Lujan

Software used, Pixelmator, Photoshop E

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Comments: 10

Raiira [2012-10-14 08:35:44 +0000 UTC]

First of all I need to say that you've done a superawesome job with the color difference between the two. The way you've worked with the colors on the purple one is seriously good, and I can't really stop staring because I like it so much. The tail is also extremely good at the purple character, while on the brown one I'm a big fan of the face. It look so natural, and you've done a good job!

And for some things to be improved. On the purple character, I feel like the second ear is missing. What you could do is to draw it behind the other one, so it still shows. Because right now they're like "straight on line" if that makes any sense. Just make it show, and the image will get a bit more deep feeling, just like that!
And as I read in your description, the brown characters chest. At this point it's a little messed up because of the way his arm bends backwards towards the other character. For a lot of good reference pictures and tutorials you can go here: [link]
I actually tried to use thumbs in this critique, but the thumbs wouldn't work when I hit the "preview" button >.< Gawd. Annoying.

Anyway, good job! Nice details and such! You've done an awesome job

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Atalix In reply to Raiira [2012-10-14 23:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you very much!
lol Ok, maybe I can do major edit on this piece and see how much I can improve on it with the other's arm and my persona's ear. |D And the guy's chest. Specially my attempt to improve on shading for realistic, we'll see how it pans out.
Also cause I'm a free member, my premium member has ran out cause I has no money. So critique button no longer works.

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drawitout [2012-05-05 05:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice detailing, and the colours in Atalix' tail are beautifully done. c:

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Atalix In reply to drawitout [2012-05-05 18:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <3

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V-o-L-T-a-i-C [2012-05-02 13:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, you added alot more colours and details : O

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Atalix In reply to V-o-L-T-a-i-C [2012-05-03 00:27:33 +0000 UTC]

heh, oh yeah, finally the little details has been added. And the skin texture on Atalix's back looks better c:

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V-o-L-T-a-i-C [2012-03-15 16:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I remember you telling me about this one!! It turned out great- your hard work and perseverance has really paid off!

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Atalix In reply to V-o-L-T-a-i-C [2012-03-15 19:12:24 +0000 UTC]

lol Thanks!

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Ravean [2012-03-15 15:44:14 +0000 UTC]

I love your character's colors and the other one's tail. Is he/she kind of like an eel?

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Atalix In reply to Ravean [2012-03-15 19:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!<3 Oh yeah, the other guy is an Eel, anthro too. |D He's a herm

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