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Athena-Tivnan — Agolant and the Elder

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Published: 2019-05-14 16:25:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 353; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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The final piece to this more-than-a-year long event, feels good to finish it once and for all  


Prompt 1 You nod, peering at Bocianne for a moment. "There have been many difficulties and hardships along this journey - Marrow injured us, Catalyst tried to eliminate us, Bocianne wished to deny us entry... but there have been many high points as well. Solstice was kind, Marvelous showed us great wonders, Eros gave us a relief from the occasional monotony that was this chase. As you said, we are not so different after all."
Requirements: Draw your Reosean agreeing with the Elder, taking the documents with the intent to deliver and have them signed. This can be packing them away, pulling them closer to have a look, etc.



X: Return Of The Skydwellers (Episode 3)X: RETURN OF THE SKY DWELLERS: EPISODE 3
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STORYLINE EVENTS
General Information:
Storyline Events are massive choose-your-adventure type events that vary in length and are usually split into several Episodes with varying amounts of Phases within each episode. 
- Phases have a certain amount of points (Phase Points) that must be reached in order to unlock and move onto the next one. In case the points needed to finish an episode and its Phases aren't met, the episode will be given an extension until the needed amount of points is met.
- Once the required phase points to unlock the next episode/phase are met, a grace period with a set time length (usually two weeks) will be given

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Comments: 5

TheMiles [2019-05-14 17:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


-Cracks knuckles- First time writing a critique here, but I couldn't pass this one without saying something!

What I find really outstanding here is the way the border works with the foiliage and the characters. I always love seeing that and this one performs the effect with perfection. The signatures outside of it are also placed in a way that it rounds the picture up!

Next up, them colors. Like, yo. Dreamy pastel fitting to the godfloofs appearance, while your neat brownie in front also shares some of it with the shading/lighting. And yet, he still is in contrast to the godly being before him, by standing outside of the border and bringing in earthy tones to this otherwise magical looking place! It's like he's grounding the picture that way and I love it.

If I'd have to say anything negative about this, is that I think the wings look a bit wobbly and the front leg ones look odd in the way they stretch, but then again I understand that
A- This guys wings aren't easy to begin with
and
B - Wings in general are usually hard to draw (I know this from my most recent pics myself!)
Besides, the left wing (from viewer perspective!) looks absolutely awesome!

I hope this critique helps you out a bit and I hope you keep up the awesome work!

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Athena-Tivnan In reply to TheMiles [2019-05-14 17:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the Critique, I agree with everything you mention, I thought the legs look odd too but nothing I did made it look better, and the wings were hard to work with. I thought the background look the best and I was trying something new which came out great.


Thank you

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Cursed-form [2019-07-04 17:08:43 +0000 UTC]

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Athena-Tivnan In reply to Cursed-form [2019-07-04 18:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I wanted to do something pretty since it was the last entry of the event.

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Cursed-form In reply to Athena-Tivnan [2019-07-05 09:20:26 +0000 UTC]

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