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AthenaMyth — Starry Night Betrayal

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Prompt: Prettier than you.

She screamed. Hurtling down from the starry heavens, the roan mare thrashed her legs, hooves clawing desperately at the starry sky in a vain attempt to pull herself back up to her home. What had she done to deserve this fate? Why was she banished from her beloved home, by a stupid and jealous god who was angry with his own Cavitto for abandoning himself and taking up with another Cavitto. She had nothing to do with the other's choices! He had no right to do this to her!

The mare barely felt the sting as she crashed through a galaxy, purple dust billowing around her as her fur caught the stars and clung to them tightly. She was far too focused on the last moment spent in her beloved home before being thrown down. The moment she caught sight of her mistress standing behind her accuser and doing nothing to protest! Her loyalty meaning nothing to her beloved mistress, the formerly great and beautiful Athena, self declared protector of horses. Not a word spoken, or a gesture made to show that the goddess even cared that she was being sent away! She gave another scream of anger and betrayal, calling out her mistress' name before her body finally reached earth, crashing through a canopy of trees and landing onto the ground below with enough force to black out.

It was well past sunset when the mare awoke with a groan. Her head was spinning and her limbs were weak, but her anger still burned. Shoving her feet underneath her body, the roan pushed herself up, feeling like a newborn foal as she took a few steps forward to survey the place where she had been dumped. Her pale eyes took in the grove she landed in, snorting in derision as she noticed they were olive trees. A taunt of what was. Well, she wouldn't let them control her any longer. Turning her back, the mare steadily walked towards the glimmering dark waters down the hill, confused as to why she was able to see so well around herself. The moon was full, but that didn't explain the slight shimmer lighting her path. It wasn't until the shallow edge of the lake that she realised what it was.

She was the one glowing. Turning her body from side to side, the starry mare admired her new plumage with hesitation at first, but became more enamoured with the glow and gleam of the stars on her body. She was stunning, even more so then she had been before. Preening for a few moments more, she didn't notice another approaching her slowly. It wasn't until he gave a low cough that she even looked up with a start, stepping back a few steps as she took the other's form in silently. Tall and dark, but he sported the same plumage she did, only his glowed a light blue. Rather masculine looking actually, but as she glanced back into the water, she had to say that she was much prettier. Which was the first thing she said to him.

"I'm prettier then you."

Blinking in surprise, the stallion looked at her for a moment before glancing back at his own pelt. "I suppose you could say that." He began slowly. "But then again, you are female. The term prettier is generally used for females isn't it?" He cocked his head slightly as he pondered it, his head still slightly light from the fall he had taken. "I could say that I am handsomer than you, and be just as right." He looked pleased with himself for countering her rather conceited jab.

"Hm. Perhaps so." The mare conceded with a toss of her silver mane. She paused an gave him another searching look before stepping around him carefully. "You are one of us, are you not? Betrayed by your master or mistress to be given over to Zeus to be tried and persecuted unjustly?" She spat his name with hatred, her anger seething up once more as she half reared.

The dark stallion was startled at her words, his bright blue eyes opened wide. "The woman cares for me! She made me feel safe and secure when I saw her... She is what I desire..." He finished quietly.

The roan gave a low snort of disgust and shoved past the stallion. "Enjoy your deluded dream stallion. For it is nothing but an empty vision. They do not want us, nor do they care for us. You will waste your time pining for a ghost." She flicked her tail in his face before trotting off, following the shoreline as a guide.

"Wait!" He called after her, slightly hurt at her decisive tone, but wishing to spend more time with someone who apparently knew what had happened to them. "What is your name?"

"It was Athene." Came the reply, softly as the mare continued on the way, without even a glance back. "But now I shall be known as Prophodia."



*wipes brow*whew... This was fun to do.^^ The background is simpler then I imagined, but it keeps the focus on them,which is what I wanted. I tried so hard not to look at these horses, but I blame Cheddarbug and my own curiousness. That and my love of greek mythology.

ID: # 95
Name: (original) Athene (self given) Prophodia (Betrayed)
Breed: Cavitto
Gender: Mare
Age: 5 years
Path: Undecided
Power: Wind
Color: Silver Blue Roan Fallen Stardust
Genotype: Ee/aa/RR/nZ/nWnd/nFsl
Registry: Not yet - owner's job
Guardian: Not yet
Secondary powers: Not yet
Path-Wings: Not yet

Also featuring *cheddarbug s handsome Artemisios

References:

Mare's body: [link]
Artemisios: [link]
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Comments: 47

SunnySometimes [2013-03-02 18:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on winning her, Athena!

*cough*I told you so*cough*

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-03-02 18:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Yes yes... I admit you were right. Thank's for ignoring my second guessing and supporting me.

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-02 18:19:42 +0000 UTC]

x3 You are welcome for all things. Now you know that I can see the future and you should listen to me from now on

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-03-02 18:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Yeah... You wish. I can see it now. 'Athena, its in your best interests to draw me fan art every day!' jk.

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-02 23:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Pfft, nooooo. Why would you think that?

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-03-03 02:38:02 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... I dunno... But somehow I think you would try to convince me it would benefit me in some way...

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-03 02:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Well,it would make me love you forever and ever...

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-03-03 02:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Lol I'm sure it would I'd be your lovely art slave. Next thing you know, I'll be doing your laundry and making you lunch. ^^ And giving back rubs. Cause every slave needs to give their owners back rubs.

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-03 04:22:40 +0000 UTC]

That sounds absolutely wonderful. You would make the best slave ever xD

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-03-03 19:48:19 +0000 UTC]

Lol nooooo... I dun wanna be a slave. *pout*

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-03 19:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Too bad

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ANIMALGIRL1869 [2013-03-02 01:58:00 +0000 UTC]

CONGRATS sweety. You won her

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AthenaMyth In reply to ANIMALGIRL1869 [2013-03-02 01:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ANIMALGIRL1869 In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-02 02:04:00 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome sweety I can't wait to see more of her in your style. I will have to do some fan art once i get the chance too

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AthenaMyth In reply to ANIMALGIRL1869 [2013-03-02 02:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

I'm sketching her ref right now.^^

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ANIMALGIRL1869 In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-02 02:11:49 +0000 UTC]

oooo can't wait to see

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cheddarbug [2013-03-02 01:46:41 +0000 UTC]

YOU WON!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!

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AthenaMyth In reply to cheddarbug [2013-03-02 01:59:40 +0000 UTC]

I just saw!!!! I'm so excited! Thank's for supporting me.

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cheddarbug In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-02 02:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Any time

I watched the judging (I don't do it, but I can see it) and I was gonna burst cause you have no idea how close you were!

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AthenaMyth In reply to cheddarbug [2013-03-02 02:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Lol I can just imagine... I figured it would be, the other stories were so good... I just tried not to think about it, not that it worked well but, I tried.

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cheddarbug In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-03-02 02:16:37 +0000 UTC]

XD

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SmexyHajiSan [2013-02-25 15:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Those ponies...

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AthenaMyth In reply to SmexyHajiSan [2013-02-25 16:20:47 +0000 UTC]

Aren't they just gorgeous? It gives me so many ancienty goodness ideas...

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SmexyHajiSan In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-25 20:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Yush. they are.

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SunnySometimes [2013-02-24 06:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this turned out fabulously! And I love the story I so hope you get her!

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-02-24 22:54:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

We'll find out on thursday.^^

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 23:50:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem :3

The suspense!

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-02-24 23:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Ugh.. I know..

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 23:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully those four days pass by somewhat quickly

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AthenaMyth In reply to SunnySometimes [2013-02-25 00:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully. Thanks again hun.

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SunnySometimes In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-25 00:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Of course

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purpleshadowbooster [2013-02-24 03:49:34 +0000 UTC]

oohh love the story

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AthenaMyth In reply to purpleshadowbooster [2013-02-24 22:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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purpleshadowbooster In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 22:56:09 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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ANIMALGIRL1869 [2013-02-24 03:02:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh my..this came out beautiful! Even the story is awesome. Good luck sweety.

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AthenaMyth In reply to ANIMALGIRL1869 [2013-02-24 22:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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ANIMALGIRL1869 In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-25 18:47:27 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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cheddarbug [2013-02-24 02:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh...and the story...if you win her...I will totally be stalking her!!! as will Art... *cough*

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AthenaMyth In reply to cheddarbug [2013-02-24 02:48:48 +0000 UTC]

LOL! The story describes her well then?

XD Oh yes Art.. be attracted to the difficult ones.

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cheddarbug In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 02:50:45 +0000 UTC]

He is going to be quite into her...and I feel like her and Apollo are going to get very fussy with each other

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AthenaMyth In reply to cheddarbug [2013-02-24 02:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol that could be interesting to play out... *tries not to plot ahead of time*

Gotta be patient and wait. Hardest part. lol.

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cheddarbug In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 02:54:04 +0000 UTC]

I know right? I hated waiting for Art....it nearly killed me! But I am totally rooting for you!

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cheddarbug [2013-02-24 02:42:01 +0000 UTC]

o.O

I...I have no words...Athena this looks amazing!!!!! I love this!!!! WOW!!!!!!

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AthenaMyth In reply to cheddarbug [2013-02-24 02:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I really appreciate you saying that

I feel like the bg is blah, but I suck at them so...

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cheddarbug In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 02:48:51 +0000 UTC]

No! I like how it focuses on the horses!

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AthenaMyth In reply to cheddarbug [2013-02-24 02:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun.

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cheddarbug In reply to AthenaMyth [2013-02-24 02:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Any time!

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