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Published: 2006-08-08 21:07:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description BRIDGE: When there's nowhere left to go
When there's nothing you can do
What choice do you really have
But just to write the note

CHORUS: Believing only leads to disappointment
Trying only leads to failure
So write the love note to the Reaper
Give it up, say goodbye

VERSE 1: I think I'm gonna be sick
If I stay here any longer
My thoughts keep running out of my head
So I put pen to paper
And put the gun to my head
I give it my all and give it all up

BRIDGE
CHORUS

VERSE 2: What do you see
In this world we live in?
Consider this song my suicide note
Eternal salvation
Sweet desperation
I'm giving up, so help me God

BRIDGE
CHORUS

VERSE 3?*: Another family mourns tonight
Another child cries tonight
Another soldier dies tonight
Fighting for the good of us all
His efforts were all in vain
Because we still live in pain
Tears still fall like the rain
Dying for the good of us all

BRIDGE
CHORUS

(Goodbye...)

*Don't know what to call it, because it's a different tune and all.
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Comments: 12

orlina11 [2010-09-04 18:10:44 +0000 UTC]

:C

This makes me sad (norilly), but my sister's friend killed herself freshman year :'C

Loverly jorb!

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desireeaho [2008-05-03 01:05:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it.
I really don't know what else to say.

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athraxio In reply to desireeaho [2008-05-04 23:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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ShadowWind14 [2006-08-10 16:20:49 +0000 UTC]

A what?!

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athraxio In reply to ShadowWind14 [2006-08-10 19:37:49 +0000 UTC]

I was talking to Shumuye and Ben, two kids at school, and they got the idea in their heads that I was planning to commit suicide. So they told the whole class, and it was really annoying.

Then again, Kim came over and started saying, "Don't kill yourself, Colleen, there's a lot of stuff to live for," and that was the first time a popular person really spoke to me and didn't make fun of me...

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ShadowWind14 In reply to athraxio [2006-08-11 21:19:48 +0000 UTC]

hmmm....lol

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ShadowWind14 [2006-08-09 16:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you are getting a little morbid.... Don't like follow the advice of your poems athrax. You aren't the type, and I'd never get glomped again, so life'd be much more boring....

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athraxio In reply to ShadowWind14 [2006-08-09 19:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I'm not gonna. Please don't pull a Shumuye/Ben move on me.

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popcorn-pops [2006-08-09 03:47:45 +0000 UTC]

Very good... except for the fact about suicide.... ummm... you aren't commiting suicide..... are you?

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athraxio In reply to popcorn-pops [2006-08-09 16:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Nonono! Definately not. That just happened to be what came to mind...yeah, I wasn't feeling good when I wrote this :*

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popcorn-pops In reply to athraxio [2006-08-10 03:46:47 +0000 UTC]

I AGREE WITH SHADOW WIND! NO ATTACKING YOURSELF OR CUTTING WRIST! YA HEAR?

P.S. My mood is not irratated i just thought it was funny. hehehe

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athraxio In reply to popcorn-pops [2006-08-10 19:39:31 +0000 UTC]

*nods meekly* I hear ya.

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