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Atlas0 In reply to RebootMatrix [2012-09-17 17:02:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique
Supergirl's muscles were totally intention: she's flexing her muscles (literally) so they expand, and the material/fabric of the outfit is shiney and fairly skin tight, so I thought it would be best to do the shading like that. In review, I probably should've been more consistent with it to have it on both sides of her, instead of doing a light side/dark side lighting.
When you say you can't see Batgirl's leg, are you referring to the coloring or the line art? I mean, do the colors make them too dark to see or did I draw them poorly? And do you mean the leg of the foreground or the one behind?
Her cape... Well, the coloring inside is too simplistic for the silky material it is, and it probably just looks a little wacky, I'll admit The exterior of the cape is leathery/latexy, a heavy material. It's probably a goof-up because I colored it the same way I did the bodysuit, and flexible fabrics shine a little differently in motion than something like that.
The picture doesn't have a story really. I just enjoy drawing these two characters a great deal. Although, I did want to capture a bit of each character's personality with a single pose, thus we've got Batgirl sneaking around while Supergirl is all smiles.
Anyway, thanks for the critique again. I appreciate it!
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RebootMatrix In reply to Atlas0 [2012-09-17 17:24:17 +0000 UTC]
The one in the forground there isn't a thick enough line to show this, no problem when u have the time, please tell me what u think of this?[link]
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Jijiyee [2012-12-03 21:28:34 +0000 UTC]
Good job ;o Wow the muscles are well done C:
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Atlas0 In reply to Jijiyee [2012-12-04 00:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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Atlas0 In reply to daremaker [2012-09-17 03:09:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I can definitely see some orange in the hair and maybe around the lightest edges of the picture -- give it a light source and all -- but what do you mean by pastel color? Like a soft orange glow or what?
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daremaker In reply to Atlas0 [2012-09-17 20:26:17 +0000 UTC]
Pretty much a soft color, it can be either orange or some lavender. Or you can add a dark orange for contrast.
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