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Published: 2010-12-20 07:14:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1925; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 26
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This is inIn his secret, heavy scan-shielded base; Bardak makes repairs and upgrades to his fighter ship, the Helios.
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certainly is in better shape than my ship... of course its a few hundred years newer and is a sleek combat vessel.
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Thanks...we'll techinally its a used/new ship. Bardak used this ship for a few years in the future (about 130 years or so from now). Ever since that alien attack and Bardak was stranded in this time period/dimension...its the most advanced/brand new fighter ship in the world.
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Looks like a very very VERY suped-up Jet-Fighter to me. glad to see some designs can still be seen in the future.
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A little idea for a design change. For better visibility you might want to raise your cockpit higher so that the pilot can see all around him, and have the stairway to the cockpit sorta approaching from below. It's a design that's common among fighters XD
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Hmmm...Interesting suggestions, however I see a few errors in your ideas. Even if the cockpit was raised, the pilot (Bardak) won't be able to see behind him. That is why his ship as multiple sensors that allow him to view from many different angles and perspectives. A "stairway to the cockpit" is already there, its just the ships design that disguises it. If you'll turn your attention to the large square panel near the cockpit.
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Arc Bine: That's true, yes. I agree that my writer is outdated when it comes to Hii-travel (What's the term for Hiira over here?). Some design considerations I can present you with, however...
-Better concealing of your wing-based weapons and engines. We hide our weapons inside our bodily ports; the same is true for our interstellar Hiira. The wing turrets need to be better placed and concealed to increase sustainability of firepower during a firefight. The same goes for the powerplant, which needs to be concealed within the fuselage. After all, in Hii-engagements, one needs to lower shields to fire (not like Kaphyrite fleet Hiira, save the Khas-Hiiraga long-range laser/ion artillery... (what do you call Hiiragas over here?) use shields) and the ship becomes immensely vulnerable to engine-pursuing Hiira. My own fleet has destroyed many Hiira and Hiiwe (Alright, my herald Scrat is going to translate for me: Hiiwe means Space Raiders, more specifically strike craft but can be used to describe space pirates) in the same manner- a minor attack by Khas-Hiiragas (All-facing Frigates) to force a firefight, while my main force of Arc-Hiiragas(Forward-armed Frigates) and Kaphyrites warp in within their fleet and destroy their weaponry and powerplants.
We also have a few sentience Hiira programmes that you may like to peruse in a battle. Many races whom we have aligned ourselves with in the past (for their protection) have asked us to provide their Hiira with such programmes. Some advantages include the gift of self-will, sentience and perception to your Hiira. Our clients have often thanked us, for these programmes offer accurate self-targeting for their Hiira. Perhaps you would like me to provide one?
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HATE KING-"Wow what a worthless looking ship! I pitty you Atomskmaster6! Having to do stuff for that damn annoying General"....
TOBY-"I have a new nick name for him! Bar-PORK! Cause he's got a flabby underbelly"!!!
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Connie (whispering): βOkay, Sonny Jim, you distract Al, and Republicat, you swipe the keys to the ship and toss βem to me as soon as Iβm in the cockpitβ¦β
The odds of an advanced spacecraft from the future having keys are about as likely as you being able to fit into the pilotβs seat, Connie.
I thought I commented before this, but apparently forgot to. 
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General Bardak: *standing behind Connie* "I'm afraid there aren't any "simple keys" to my ship. Besides, even if you somehow got onto the bridge, every control on my ship uses advanced biometrics...meaning without my DNA signature and command codes at the same time, the Helios won't go anywhere or do anything."
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Connie: βBye-oh or not, I donβt use the metric system! And soon as I get a handwritinβ expert to forge your dee-in-ayeβs signature, Iβll be back!β
Connie, you know about DNA--remember how much fun you had learning about Monica Lewinskyβs dress? And yeah, I figured the ship would have security measures along those lines.
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General Bardak: "How do you intend to get my handwriting if I never signed anything in AF? Besides how do you intend to get the command codes?"
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Connie: βIβ¦ Iβll, uhβ¦ just lemme use the damn thing!β
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General Bardak: "I'm afraid I can't do that"
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She gave up⦠for now!
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I really doubt she will succeed next time. Bardak will have a few surprises waiting for her.
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You know, even if that other story we tried to write never comes together, a short one featuring Connie trying to get some of Bardakβs technology would be amusing. Hypothetically, what surprises might he have in store?
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Actually, even though I put that aside because of school and other projects, it will eventually come together. First I still have to shorten it. Maybe we could focus on a short story, this time by notes?
OK, I'll describe it to you... Bardak has *"Roll out the barrel" song plays loudly, covering my voice*...and that is exactly what kind of surprises are in store for Connie.
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Thanks; also, its the same ship used to help Marcella's ship. (By the way, I sent you a note)
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when did you sent me a note?
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I thought I sent it , but found out DA erased it. I re-sent you the note
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Sounds good to me!!
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Formidable main gun there... compensating for something? 
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Thanks; no not really
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The real question is, how does the guy find a parking space?
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Well space is very very enormous, though it is a bad idea to park in the middle of space, he normally parks his fighter ship on his command ship *the U.R.S.S. Trinity*
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i fear that bird wouldn't be very aerodynamic.
maybe in outer space.
nice design, though.
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Thanks; well since that ship is capable of warp speed, if it can generate that much power imagine how fast and maneuverable it is in the Earth's sky.
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Aerodynamics are overrated. If it has enough power it could be shaped like a brick and still fly. (see U.S Space Shuttle program)
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That is exactly how my father described the F-4 Phantom LOL...
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Bad move...*uses BTR to transmit pre-fix code, all systems shut down and the ship is now under the General's control and you are suddenly transported to Tartarus.*
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Cool ship, I like how the cockpit sort of bulges up like a snake's head ready to strike. Is this the ship Bardak assaulted the moon base with? If not, how many ships does he have?
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Thanks; and yes, that is the ship he used to assault Ultrawomans moon base!!
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General Bardak: "Sorry Polygirl, I'm currently upgrading it right now and I don't need any help!"
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Polygirl: "I can help you upgrade it! I have some power boosters that should triple your weapon power...I think."
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General Bardak: *takes the power boosters and examines them, then gives them back to Polygirl* "I appreciate the offer, but your power boosters are completely incompatible with my weapon systems or any of my systems for that matter, even if they weren't, this would cause an overload when I fire."
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