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Description EDIT- COLOR 8U I'll shade it when my eyes recoup ^_^ Been squinting a lot LOL


So im working on a full-body picture as a contest prize (yes omg, im still working on those.. bad me) for

this ones gonna take me a while LOL most complex thing ive tried to draw like ever i think haha But its such a gorgeous character, love it!

just wanted to post to get some crits maybe, its still very sketchy so sorry if its harder to critique that way but i really want some feedback before i make another sketch pass/line!
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Comments: 16

Enaxn [2015-03-23 01:09:29 +0000 UTC]

OMG LOOK AT THIS.  I love love this character and the COLORS.  They're orange and blue and both of them ugh just AMAZING.  You did SUCH a good job with this. Omg I love those FEET.  And the wings. THE WINGS ARE SO COOL.  I absolutely love the face too.  And all those teeth.  And those little fiery innards.  Ugh I am so into this entire thing.  AMAZING JOB. 

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Atrocias In reply to Enaxn [2015-03-23 16:49:37 +0000 UTC]

;0; <3<3 THANK YOUUU. The face is my favorite part, and that foot that all "rar ima grab yu!" Hopefully i can start shading it today <3

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finiens [2015-03-22 15:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Really nice, can´t wait for the shadows and highlights!:3

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Atrocias In reply to finiens [2015-03-23 16:48:59 +0000 UTC]

me too im almost scared to start working on it lol!

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finiens In reply to Atrocias [2015-03-23 16:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Why? You can always start over when something isn´t to your liking.^^

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TheButterfly [2015-03-22 03:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Really cool! Love the colors. Looks like a fractal come to life

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Atrocias In reply to TheButterfly [2015-03-23 16:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome colors, its a bit difficult for me working so dark so i hope in the end it works out ;U; thanks!

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spiralofvertigo [2015-03-22 01:11:33 +0000 UTC]

I didn't expect this color scheme when I saw the line art but these colors work really well for this design! I really like it.

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Atrocias In reply to spiralofvertigo [2015-03-23 16:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Yes beautiful character, i hope it turns out well when i shade it!

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finiens [2015-03-21 20:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Maaaan, it´s good to have you back!<3
I missed your drawings and our conversations.

The sketch looks fine so far, although the head & neck (and the left foot) seem a little to big for the rest of the body. You could also make the upper jaw a tad longer or the lower a bit smaller to even them out, but that´s probably just my personal taste.

Otherwise it´s great. I love the legs and the claws, they are pure awesomness!*w*

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Atrocias In reply to finiens [2015-03-21 20:41:07 +0000 UTC]

the left foot like his left? (the farther one?) I can def see that, i tried to make the other one bigger to match but maybe i shoulda just shrunk it a little!! Ill try with making the upper longer maybe, or vise versa like you said! and maybe just shrink it down a tad overall

And yes its so great to talk to you again!! <3 ;-; ive missed posting, i went into a huge rut and worked mostly privately on some things but even then i just kinda died.. its great to draw again more frequently :} <3

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finiens In reply to Atrocias [2015-03-21 21:14:59 +0000 UTC]

That´s the one I meant.
I absolutely adore big feet/claws on a creature and Dae has a really nice pair of stompers, so maybe you should make the other one bigger after all.XD
If the jaws don´t bother you there´s no need to change them. It´s just a slight size difference I noticed and once it´s coloured, it´ll be even harder to spot.

Oh yes, and please upload all the stuff you draw!<3

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Atrocias In reply to finiens [2015-03-21 21:39:46 +0000 UTC]

omg moving the jaw back made the face look so much better, and i moved his neck up a bit aw well it looks more balanced! I was going to try to stream but i have no idea how to use picarto tv i guess LOL

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finiens In reply to Atrocias [2015-03-21 22:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!
It´s often the little details that make the difference. Maybe I should upload WIPs and ask for opinions from time to time, too.
Well, I never streamed once in my life, so I won´t be able to help you. But picarto seems to be really popular right now, maybe you´ll find some online (video?) tutorials on how t do it.
 

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Atrocias In reply to finiens [2015-03-21 22:23:57 +0000 UTC]

heres what it looks like so far ;u; face looks so much better! www.dropbox.com/s/jufjf9ung48z…

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finiens In reply to Atrocias [2015-03-21 22:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, it does!*____*
Much more like Dae.

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