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aug325 — 'I'm dying you moron'

Published: 2009-06-24 15:56:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2413; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 26
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Description 'Hidan’s breathing quickened and wrapped his arms around his stomach and shut his eyes tightly and coughed.
Kakuzu was watching Hidan’s actions and was confused by them.
“Hidan what’s wrong with you?” Kakuzu asked, because Hidan has acted strangely for the past two days. Hidan opened his eyes half way and looked at Kakuzu and smiled sadly and pain over came and Hidan gritted his teeth
“Ugh… I’m dying you moron” Hidan said softly through gritted teeth'

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This is unrelated to my comic This is a gift for and her amazing fanfic: [link]
Check it out!
Warning: The story contains Itachi/Kisame and Hidan/Kakuzu. Don't like don't watch.
Well............ I basically hate the Itachi/Kisame pairing, but as far as a fanfic's story and plot I loved it really much.
I've been wanting to write a story in which Hidan loses his immortality for AGES, but I saw this fanfic, and she beat me too it. Of corse, for me... there would be less smut if I made it. *guys making out is smut for me* I can read it, and watch it, but I can't draw it. I still have my standards. Standards are what keeps me sane.

I know in your fanfic, That Hidan just coughs, and doesn't cough up blood. But when I read that fanfic, in my minds eye, I could seriously see Hidan coughing up blood, and hacking.... and shaking and..... and... cringing... and dying and...
*sweatdrop*
Lol Sorry. I REALLY have a thing for fictional chars in pain.

Hope You like the pic, ObitoUchiha50!

I like the light on Kakuzu's face. Hidan looks pale. '_'
Well....... I guess that's okay, since he's dying....
READ HER FANFIC! IT'S PWNSOME! XD
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Comments: 10

hidashika-fangirl [2010-04-19 19:25:02 +0000 UTC]

this is pretty -///////-

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aug325 In reply to hidashika-fangirl [2010-04-19 19:35:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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hidashika-fangirl In reply to aug325 [2010-04-19 19:38:12 +0000 UTC]

how do u make those faces?

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aug325 In reply to hidashika-fangirl [2010-04-19 19:54:50 +0000 UTC]

I drew them?

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hidashika-fangirl In reply to aug325 [2010-04-19 20:54:36 +0000 UTC]

no i mean those icon thingys you type :0

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Gods-Dragon [2009-09-23 15:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I feel sorry for Hidan though. Kakuzu looks so clueless. Great pic, very cute(sad).

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Hidan-ftw [2009-06-28 00:59:30 +0000 UTC]

lol Kakuzu look clueless XD

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ObitoUchiha50 [2009-06-24 16:23:38 +0000 UTC]

That is so cool! Great job
and thanks again =^.^=
I felt sorry for Hidan
You could write your own version of the story, when Hidan becomes mortal
And I would totally read it

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aug325 In reply to ObitoUchiha50 [2009-06-25 16:16:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
My idead for the story was different though. Basically, it's a documentary of Hidan slowly losing his immortality and his mind after Shikamaru blew him up in a hole.
I probally won't write it though. I'm busy this summer...

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ObitoUchiha50 In reply to aug325 [2009-06-25 16:52:27 +0000 UTC]

That would've been a good story XD

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