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Published: 2010-12-02 20:11:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 9743; Favourites: 350; Downloads: 131
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"Once there was a ferocious dragon, terrified humans prayed to God for his help.First he send Angel of Mercy to the earth.
Her policy is unanimity between the dragon and humans,
but this way was so delay and it seem to be never accomplished.
Then God send Demonic Angel of Doom to come after.
He finished humans' problem just one-two sword.
The angel wept. She couldn't bond the dragon with humans."
PS: I'm not good at English, but I've tried.
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Doom Angel: If love, peace, tolerance and understanding doesn't work, neutralize the subject with extreme prejudice. The only good dragon is a dead dragon, little one.
Mercy: Could we at least take the poor dear to a good taxidermist?
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I like the goat / sheep symbolism / comparison and designs.
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I am going to fave this picartwork...
I hope you don't mind too much...
*runs off to fave*
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I can understand it love, no worries.
Sad story, I love the picture though, conveys all the emotions!
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I've polished it a bit for you. Happy Holidays. I'll probably have some more work for you soon.
Once there was a ferocious dragon.
Terrified, the humans prayed to God for help.
First, God sent an Angel of Mercy to the earth.
Her policy: unanimity between the dragon and the humans.
But despite her efforts, it never was accomplished.
So God allowed a Demon of Doom to come upon the earth.
He solved the humans' problem with his deadly blade.
The Angel of Mercy wept,
for the dragon and the humans would never be as one.
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Aww... Really beautiful work. Both story and picture are just awesome.
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Excellent, as always :] Don't worry with the language, you conveyed the message well and that's what matters. I like how you blend cultural elements into your pictures, they feel deep and interesting.
Keep it up!
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wow, it took me awhile to figure out that whole 'rock pile' was the dragon XC i feel slow and stupid XD lovely piece tho!
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ironically the only way to obtain peace is with more violence.
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that give me chill :'3 the dragon character is so cool and the picture look very awesome <3
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I love it!
I think your brand of english makes the story more charming, too. Makes it read more like an old story
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ในที่สุดก็ตัดจบแล้ว ; w ;
สวยงามน่ารักมากครับ เพิ่มรอยแผลที่มังกรแล้วดูดราม่ามากขึ้น :3
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ชอบ concept มากฮะ สีสวย
ปล. นางฟ้าแกะ ? น่ารักมากฮะ
อันนี้นอกเรื่อง
ผมว่าใช้ terrified human มันแปลกๆนะฮะ ที่จริงมันก็น่าจะแปลว่า มนุษย์ที่หวาดกลัว (ในที่นี้คือหวาดกลัวมังกร)
แต่ผมรู้สึกมันแปลว่ามนุษย์ที่ดูน่ากลัวมากกว่าแฮะ ( มนุษย์ที่ดูโหดร้ายน่ากลัว)
เปลี่ยนไปใช้ poor ก็ได้นะฮะ Poor human ( มนุษย์ที่ดูน่าสงสาร , ดูต่ำต้อย )
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Poor thing, she needs a hug, why dont you draw a child hugging her
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That's really a wonderful picture. I like how it turned out, the atmosphere, the feeling.
The story has a lot of potential, really. I hope you'll develop it more.
That's defenitely a proof than cute anthro art can be used for meaningful and deep stories.
Good job. ^^
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Poor angel and dragon~! :'C!
Very nicely done though~! I love the Angel of Doom's "whatever" expression x3
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