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Published: 2009-08-31 01:36:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2147; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Yes, it's a temporary ENDSelenna won.
Who was that Clara girl?
And those two women?
Hope I'll can explain it in a cool way on the next pages - to be published SOON
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snif a shame, I liked Clara... well she gave Selenna plenty of oportunity, when she broke her hand she was ready to be killed.. because of that bit of honor she dies... snif a shame
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thank you! please say to me... do you could guess who would win this fight, selenna or clara?
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I truly had no idea who would win. I was hoping Clara would, haha...simply becuase I like her pants ^^'
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amazing pants, don't you think? I loved her design! She had left a lot of fans after her death
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Your review as requested~
Wow! I thought the main character was going to lose right off the bat! D: Way to keep us on the edge of our seats! lol What a shame... I liked the other girl. 
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I really loved the entire comic...
Although I liked Clara more xDD
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Oh thank you! So many readers like so much clara, so we posted a draw of her killing selenna
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Aha! 'k ^^
But you really have some skills , believe me
Btw, I'mma add you to my deviantwatch, because I'm too lazy to check for new artwork daily
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amazing art, i could tell what was ging on with who and who punched and oh i was fantactic!. keep up the great work!
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ha tahnk you so much! It feels so good whn we hear this kind of opinion about our work!
We're posting more pages on september 20th, so please keep with us!
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Certo, hora de comentar!
Cara (ou caras), muito bom o trabalho! Gostei muito do traço, muito bonito, da arte final, que dá um contraste de algo obscuro e bem trabalhada e os detalhes e fundos são magníficos! (e essa tb é a primeira vez q vejo uma história q SÓ tem mulheres hehe)
Bem, mas agora algumas poucas coisas q pensei tb. Sei que esse é um prólogo, ele deixa muitas dúvidas e nenhuma explicação, realmente espero q no próximo capítulo tudo seja explicado, senão fica muito confuso o porque de uma luta até a morte e das duas mulheres estranhas. Outra coisa é a quantidade de painéis página, o desenho de vc ou vcs é muito bom, mas como há muitos painéis na maioria dos casos (entre 6 a 8), os desenhos ficam pequenos. Sei q é complicado, pois menos painés = mais páginas = mais trabalho. É só um comentário. Não sou totalmente contra pq este estilo de ação smplificada em vários quadros juntos deixa o estilo mais original (pois geralmente ação são extremamente grandes e cheias de speed lines etc) e vcs foram diferentes.
ehehe, meio confuso o q disse, mas eu achei muito interessante ^^v
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Olá! Olha em primeiro lugar, muito obrigado por nos dar esse feedback tão grande! Nossa isso vale muito pra nós...
Primeiro, estamos ainda pensando na página de prologo que seria antes da página 01... eu fiz uma nova versão, que está na descrição desse ([link] ) desenho. Se vc ler e puder me dizer se está suficiente para uma intro, puxa eu te agradeceria muito
Segundo, quanto ao tamanho dos quadrinhos, vc tem razão, ao menos na versão digital dá pra botar uma resolução alta e a pg fica visivel... se rolar uma edição impressa, realmente acho que complicaria - temos que pensar nisso.
como é nosso primeiro trabalho juntos, temos muito a aprender, e se vc puder nos acompanhar, agradecemos muito e prometemos que cada trabalho será melhor que o anterior 
abração!
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si, pero no mucho
en verdad, yo soy brasileño
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well what i was going to say was pretty much what the previous users said already
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it's so good to hear it from an great artist like you! I'm honored. Until september 20th (when story continues) we'll keep posting material... please came by anytime!
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you've got some well done action sequences with a good sense of movement. and the panels flow nicely. looking good. keep it up.
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oh thank you
we'll upload more pages on september 20th... hope you'll be there with us
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Now that I've gone through all 16 pages, I can give you a proper review.
All I can say...is WOW. W.O.W.
I'm kidding. This wouldn't be worth it if that was all I had to say. Your drawing talent is incredible!
I would love to be able to draw like you...simply magnificent. This is real, cutting edge comic book material here! You should get this published!
Your variety of body positions was excellent. You showed the movement throughout the pages very nicely, especially during the fight scenes and chase scenes.
The detail you put into the characters and the surroundings was very nice. You showed a good balance of making it all blend--not making the focus TOO MUCH on the characters or the scenery. As the reader, you could see them both, and know what sort of area they were in, but neither was shoved in your face. Beautifully drawn.
All in all, I am insanely jealous of your talents! And I love your work! Must add you to deviant watch!
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thank you so much for that feedback and the watch.
Now I'm the one without words
Please visit us anytime, we're try to post material asap, here and in the website!
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I most certainly will! Now that I have you on watch, I can see when you post your lovely work!
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;X; me da lastima la tipa! pero se lo merece por peleonera T.T aun ke me da cosita!!!
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Sin embargo, Clara tera mas historias!
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owO ya veo! siii por ke o entiendo por ke se peleo con la otra chica (se me olvido el nombre xD!!)
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yes u killed my girl XD
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ah sorry
Maybe I'll put some mirror universe comic as when Clara killed Selenna.
What do you think? Clara would snap Selenna's head off
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O_O or....SHE COULD HAVE A TWIN SISTER
lol i dont mind what you do i its not my story i like it even with out her
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And she won~! lol somehow i was secretly rooting for her >_> maybe because she was getting beat up so bad i felt sorry for her in the beginning.. but she pulled through
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yes now i'm posting more about then!
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