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Warhound-CMP [2010-05-17 03:01:41 +0000 UTC]

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I like the design! Here she looks more adventurer fighter, or a young or poor soldier, or a poor mercenary.
She has no heavy armor which would be expensive or mean you've seen many battles.

In the previous images, she looks more like a Crusader, or low born night. I enjoy this current version more because it could go any where for story or character development.
If she needs or wants more armor or gear, she needs to work for it, which means more story. More comics ^ ^

I voted short short short hair XD But this is just fine.
Perhaps give her a hair knot or something tied into bangs or something. It would give her more character, plus its something to make here stand out in a large page layout of multiple characters, and lets you identify here immeadiatly in a group.

A suggestion. She needs a gauntlet on one arm or shoulder. Like the gloves, to give more protection. Even if she uses a shield one arm will be out front for enemy to strike at, a protected shoulder or full-arm guantlet even if leather, or simple armor would be more good in battle.
You cant block without a shield. And club is a slow weapon.
Arm gauntlet might be neat? ^ ^

I like this design on club! Its not overly large, and the hilt is flat, so you could slap or flat strike foe with it.

What I dont like:
The longer sword. Keep the shorter Gladius / Roman soldier type sword. Its more of a gladiator or close combat weapon.
Kinda more of a common weapon also?

I dont feel she has enough personal identity markers.
A hair tie or hair beads, little something more with necklace, tattoo? Armband or something, that makes her personality and individuality come out.

Overall I feel this is a more powerfull image or design for the character.

PS: do you have some written character descriptions?
I didnt spy any with a quick look over ><;;;
Would love a link to read up more on character ^ ^

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Thalyda [2010-06-12 20:18:11 +0000 UTC]

I coloured this one too
[link]

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zanna2100 [2010-06-01 15:55:50 +0000 UTC]

ooh i like this one, but i dont care for the mace, i think she is a strait up sword woman.

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WolfDemonYuki [2010-05-23 20:24:04 +0000 UTC]

I like the new art style on the bodies, it gives them more length and grace while still having power. But the faces are just awkward.

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Sharm-star20K [2010-05-22 09:36:11 +0000 UTC]

I like the older style shading and line art it made the character look a little more helpful to those around her, the new outfit is ok but looks more like something for a color comic

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Hraesvelgr [2010-05-20 06:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Really enjoy this drawing, and the style. Not sure how to compare it to the style of the older images; it looks a bit tougher, both in how the lines are drawn and in her stance; I think for that reason I like it.

Thanks for sharing.

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Melesifant [2010-05-17 04:27:38 +0000 UTC]

She looks ready to kick ass! kinda like I'm a girl so what?

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EmelieTheStrange [2010-05-16 22:52:24 +0000 UTC]

I like that mace-looking weapon ^^,

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metanoia00 [2010-05-16 22:05:39 +0000 UTC]

I like it very much, although I also like the older versions. I think her shorter hair makes her look more like a soldier.

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TiElGar [2010-05-16 20:41:36 +0000 UTC]

All are very beautiful and detailed This style made Enya more tall. I like her in old way, and in this she is good, just more new... I can't choose among outfits, and, i think, it is very interesting and realistic, than the character have different outfit in different parts of the story)

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Keto-Pagano [2010-05-16 20:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Fala sério, essa nova roupa é muito foda O_O gostei tanto que até vou favar *faveia sem do nem piedade*

roupa de mulheres guerreiras ownam, eu pessoalmente nom sou boa para cria-las, mas essa ta aprovada com carinbo

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Thalyda [2010-05-16 17:11:09 +0000 UTC]

I like her body! The hair kinda shows that she doesn't care about being feminine and attractive. She has better things to do

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PoisonRemedy [2010-05-16 15:16:25 +0000 UTC]

It's nice, it has a kind of steampunkish vibe to it. I like how she looks in the new outfit. It looks light enough that she can move freely but sensible enough to protect her during battle.

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