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Auremun β Just Bored.
Published: 2016-08-23 23:32:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Beautiful, isn't she? :'PRelated content
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Okay! This is my opinion. I'm not an expert or anything but you asked for a critique, so here! Dont hate me plz...
Vision: I dont really know much about this topic so Im going to critique on other parts, sorry!
Originality: I also dont know much about this, obviously...Okay, I have seen stuff like this on DA before, alot... You style also has a resemblance to others Ive seen. However I guess it is original. The character design is pretty unique but I dont really see what she is.. Is she a turtle? I think so... Also, I havent seen people draw eyes like that before, nice!
Technique: okay! Im more comfortable with this! The hair was really well done and I can tell you but some effort into it! I also like the technique used for the shading! Simple ish, but I can tell where the light is, and personally I like it! The line are also, pretty clean, however I do see some slip ups in certain places.
Also, I know how hard it is to erase things, but if you have a kneadable eraser, you can dab it to sort of erase the lines where you tried to design the foot.
If you dont have one, thats fine! But if you ever have some extra money I suggest getting one, I found mine at the dollar tree.
Impact: Okay, this one is kinda debatable. It makes me kind of bored. I know she is bored, but It doesn't seem like a good thing to make a veiw feel bored of your art. You get it? Even I'm confused...Also She looks kind or like she long for something, or someone, rather that being bored.
Overall I like the piece, Its kewl. And remember, Im no good at these things, so correct me if you want, but try not to be rude.
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What? I won't hate you xD the reason I ask for critiques is because I really want to know what others think about my draws! Not only a comment "cute"... So don't worry, I think you're right 
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Really? Such a disgusting people! The critiques when are made with reason, are made for help to improve the artist's skills!... Well, i'm not an artist, it's just my hobby... But anyways want improve my self :'v
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Im a hobbyist to! d love to do comishes and stuff, but no one offers me any... 
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What you have in mind?
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I'll note ya what she looks like X3
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My new sonic oc (she needs a sexy Badass Gothic outfit colors are : Black yellow and purple and Maroon red)
It has to be art flow friendly plz
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Look, now I'm busy with a lot of stuff that I want to do for all my Oc's and a contest, and i don't want to be rude, but I can, i only take "request" from close friends or when the idea like me and inspired me, So basically if you really want something from me, I only will take if it is a commission, cuz i really need points xD if not, sorry i can't :v you can always ask, but I won't always do it, cuz I'm really busy and lazy :'P
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