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AuroraGriffin — Humanized Jenner And Mrs. Brisby WIP Colorization

Published: 2012-12-01 01:34:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3064; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 9
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Description Okay, I guess I can consider this a collaboration. The line-art was done by ~baren777 . I just colored this with her permission.

Original: [link]

Anyway, this is a WIP, because I wanted to have something to show for my work so far, but it probably won't be 100% done until sometime next week.

For the time being, I just made the lower part a sepia glow, so that it didn't look too undone. And there's a lot of edge clean-up still needed, ...

... byt yeah, Baren, ... this is what it your Dev with my color looks like so far ...

EDIT:

Okay, per the feedback of ~Stitchpunk89 and ~baren777 , I've tweaked their complexions, swapping them, fixed her hair, using color-reference from an actual screenie (the one where Brisby and Ages are talking, just before she gets into his basket elevator), and fixed his sleeves, mixing some violet in. (I love the way I can "mix" colors in PSP 5).

So, ... THIS is what I got so far, and probably as much as I have time for right now. I'll mess with it more as I have time later. And inclination. It just doesn't work if the inclination and inspiration aren't there, eh?
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Comments: 29

NoxidamXV [2014-12-29 07:20:36 +0000 UTC]

... SHIP      

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AuroraGriffin In reply to NoxidamXV [2014-12-29 08:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^ I just wish I still had the source data for the project. My old comp died and ate the multilayer file that was the basis for this work. ... If I ever finish, I've got to probably start over. >_>

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NoxidamXV In reply to AuroraGriffin [2014-12-29 08:12:54 +0000 UTC]

I still think it's hot. X3

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AuroraGriffin In reply to NoxidamXV [2014-12-30 09:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Thanks. Of course, ,,, remember to give credit to the original artist, too. I just colored this with her permission. ^_^

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AuroraGriffin [2012-12-10 15:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Just a little update: Sorry I haven't been able to get anything further done on this. PSP is acting up and won't open. Trying to figure out what's wrong. As soon as it's working again, I'll be able to finish this ...

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Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-03 23:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Biff's skin looks sunburned. :/
Can you fix it and make it fair/ivory? (Sorry for saying this. )

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-04 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Okay, ... I think that ought to do it. How's this?

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Stitchpunk89 In reply to AuroraGriffin [2012-12-04 03:25:42 +0000 UTC]

A little more lighter, just about as light as Jenner's skin.

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-04 04:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay, that should do it. It's about a 2 or 3 percent diff. Any more and there will be no diff. LOL!

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Stitchpunk89 In reply to AuroraGriffin [2012-12-04 13:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Perfect! Absolutely perfect!
Okay, yeah, done! I'll stop bugging you now, only cause its perfect now! ^^ (I can be picky with myself about art too because I'm a dedicated artistas well as writer. LOL)

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-04 20:13:40 +0000 UTC]

LOLOLOL!!! Alright!

Glad we got it to the point that we both like it. I wouldn't have felt good about working on it more, if I couldn't get something the way I need it to be -- or to the point you like the results, too.

Now, when I get some time, I'll work some more on this ...

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Stitchpunk89 In reply to AuroraGriffin [2012-12-04 23:15:45 +0000 UTC]

work more on what?

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-05 04:15:40 +0000 UTC]

... this color job. x)

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-04 04:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Hm. ... About 5% in the other direction then. ... Won't be much diff when done, I guess. XD

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-04 00:33:58 +0000 UTC]

So, should I just make both the same complexion? ... I'll see what I can do.

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baren777 [2012-12-03 23:20:05 +0000 UTC]

3 ooooooh~!!!!! lovely~!!!

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AuroraGriffin In reply to baren777 [2012-12-04 00:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Thx!

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baren777 [2012-12-01 19:53:33 +0000 UTC]

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!!

but one little thing, one artist to another; I thought that maybe Jenner's skin tone would be a bit paler while Brisby's would be a bit tan, what with him living underground and her being a field mouse. but that's just me.

again, THIS IS SO AWESOME~!!!! I cant wait to see what it looks like all finished!!!

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AuroraGriffin In reply to baren777 [2012-12-01 22:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so, ... I did some tweaks. Glad to have gotten some work done on it.

Now, I guess, I'm off to do some of my World of Warcraft Dailies!

(Does anyone else think the difficulty of some the new quests for Domination Point in Krasarang Wilds needs to be nerfed a bit? It's really not worth the repair bill of my gear right now. LOL!)

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AuroraGriffin In reply to baren777 [2012-12-01 22:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Your friend mentioned the idea of the edit, too. But did not supply the reason you just gave.

I think that makes perfect sense.

Just I wanted to make there be a difference -- and got the idea of him being dark in more than the one way. LOL!

Okay, so when I get back into it, I'll see if I can swap the complexions without wrecking my work. x)

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Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-01 02:03:45 +0000 UTC]

This looks great, its beautiful so far, though I'd fix Jenner's skin color (make it very fair (like pale/paper white)) & Jenner's sleeves are suppose to be dark purple or violet.
PS: I like Biff's hair color, but I think its suppose to be light brown.
Sorry, I'm very picky about colors. -^^-

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-01 02:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, it is a WIP. I'll fix these as I go.

LOL, I wanted Jenner to have a different complexion, but now, the idea he's supposed to be pale makes him look sunburned here!

The sleeve. In screenshots, they look pink, which definitely doesn't feel right. I'll see what I can do to shift the hue to something we both like.

Brisby's hair. Easy enough to fix, when I fee like getting back into it ...

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Stitchpunk89 In reply to AuroraGriffin [2012-12-01 03:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay.
Just thought I'd help you fix those little bleeps there.
Other than that, I love that you added some color to one of baren777's NIMH art. What did you use? Photoshop?

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-01 03:29:33 +0000 UTC]

I use Paint Shop Pro 5.

I know, last I checked, there was a Version 9, but I didn't like it, because I could figure out how to make it do what I need, so I downgraded back to PSP 5.

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Stitchpunk89 In reply to AuroraGriffin [2012-12-01 03:35:07 +0000 UTC]

I see. I'm getting really close to getting a macbook pro laptop (about $400 away) for myself so I can do my stories and make my pictures better with Adobe Photoshop. (I think you can paint with Photoshop, right?)

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-01 04:53:00 +0000 UTC]

I dunno. I think I used to have Photoshop installed to a past system, but I only used it for special effect touch-ups ...

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Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-01 01:58:59 +0000 UTC]

baren777 is a girl. just an FYI ^^/

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AuroraGriffin In reply to Stitchpunk89 [2012-12-01 02:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Oops, sry. Trying to find where I said otherwise, but can't. x)

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AuroraGriffin In reply to AuroraGriffin [2012-12-01 02:09:08 +0000 UTC]

Double-oops. I see where I goofed. ... Fixed.

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