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Published: 2012-04-19 01:54:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 802; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 20
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Description PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK!

I am going to be submitting this as my entry to : [link]

Cookie Monster...

KING OF THE COOKIES!

If there is anything you think I should fix/tweak please let me know. I would love to improve my chances at winning the competition in any way possible so that I might be able to fulfill my dream of somehow, someday owning a cintiq!
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Comments: 18

Fahrenheit1989 [2014-12-14 18:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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xxcaramelxx [2012-04-19 08:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Great

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avaplum In reply to xxcaramelxx [2012-04-19 09:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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LarevaArt [2012-04-19 06:48:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah! I saw this contest. I hope you do well!

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avaplum In reply to LarevaArt [2012-04-19 07:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope so too. ^_^

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deadself [2012-04-19 05:50:20 +0000 UTC]

haha, that's cool! and funny!

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avaplum In reply to deadself [2012-04-19 05:53:36 +0000 UTC]

=] thanks

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deadself In reply to avaplum [2012-04-19 06:00:08 +0000 UTC]

haha, yup!

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StarEclypse [2012-04-19 04:02:04 +0000 UTC]

This looks great Cookie monster is really the king of cookies. My only concern would be the bottom part of the stack of cookies. They kind of look more like pancakes and it seems to the area with the least amount of attention. Otherwise I love the design, especially how the blue really pops out

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avaplum In reply to StarEclypse [2012-04-19 04:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm editing it now based on the critique I've gotten so far. I've taken out many of the cookies to focus more on the monsta

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StarEclypse In reply to avaplum [2012-04-19 04:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good. I wouldn't take out too many cookies he looks like a fine ruler atop his castle.

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avaplum In reply to StarEclypse [2012-04-19 05:24:35 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Yay! He's the cookie king, after all~

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bluesapphire22 [2012-04-19 02:57:40 +0000 UTC]

I love cookie monster...really great job

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avaplum In reply to bluesapphire22 [2012-04-19 03:03:34 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks!

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brandojones [2012-04-19 02:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha, love it. Before I read the description I thought it would make a nice T-shirt for Threadless. And that's what you're doing..

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avaplum In reply to brandojones [2012-04-19 02:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Yesss! I'm glad! I'm trying to get some feedback before I submit it to the website~<3

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brandojones In reply to avaplum [2012-04-19 02:02:25 +0000 UTC]

I can't think of anything to change... hah. Tell me when you submit it and I'll vote it up.

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avaplum In reply to brandojones [2012-04-19 02:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! That would mean so much to me. Thank you I will!

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