madmax122776 [2010-05-20 16:28:32 +0000 UTC]
I love her hair! So sexy!!
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the-disposessed [2005-10-27 15:28:29 +0000 UTC]
i really like the composition and angle.. and the tone / texture / colour of everything is wonderful, particularly the hair. the time spent on it definitely shows. the only thing i am a little dubious about is the right top corner. i don't feel it's really pulling it's weight, if that makes sense... if you divide the image into vertical quarters, the last one doesnt seem to be needed and it drew my eye off the focus a little, i think. but with or without it, it's a great image, for which you deserve accolades! i like the great sense of stillness and the moodiness of it.
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avarin In reply to the-disposessed [2005-10-28 01:55:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I think you're right about the top right corner [I had to go and check ]. I'm not sure what to do about it though, I think it's my bias in framing. Damn bias! I tried to imagine it with the last vertical quarter cut off and my brain instinctively went, 'Nooooo!', then, 'Logically, perhaps.' *shrug*
the-disposessed In reply to avarin [2005-10-28 08:14:15 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it needs changing . My thing with the vertical part that i'd crop isnt so much "this part of the image is doing nasty things" so much as "if i were doing this, this part of the image wouldn't be here", and i like your methods quite fine.
kanata [2005-10-26 07:34:32 +0000 UTC]
Bah, I want to say something interesting but I've said all my opinions on it to you in person already at the exhibition but yey! you've posted stuff up! Thats heaps cool, hope you have more for later, end of semester and all SO creepy...
vulpixfairy [2005-10-26 05:58:16 +0000 UTC]
o right, i seen that picture before, hiya, it's denise ^^ heard that the exhibition went well ^^ signed by the vulpixfairy