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AVolatileCalm — 25th July 2011.
Published: 2011-07-25 22:27:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description One
I owe them my life;
people's friendships, hearts
and random acts of kindness.
My insides are a town of regret
and age-old stupidity of moments
lost to ticking time and
the passing world.

Two
One morning I woke up
and it was like a massacre
had crept onto my sheets;
there was blood all over
my hands, my face
running from my nose
running from my eyes
and they were running back/forth
into each other.
I looked in the mirror and remembered
this is the most clean I had
felt in the longest time.

Three
Please tell me the precise
moment you stopped enjoying me;
the breath I exhaled that
convinced you I wasn't the person
you had created
in your mind.

Four
Come back from the edge,
honey my cage is ready for you.

Five
We partied on a tin roof all night
and I kissed my best-friend-for
-life with my tongue
and we screamed at the stars,
daring russia to give us
a more potent vodka to fill our veins
and the night was cold and I
smiled into darkness
feeling invincible.

Six
I pull out your hair
leave rip-marks on your chest
as we scream and thrust ourselves
into each other with such
force we are bruised;
there is a moment
of ecstasy

like the drug
we are left with emptiness.
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Comments: 32

KHCloudGavlin [2011-07-27 02:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Deep, visceral, and profane... I love it, :-p

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AVolatileCalm In reply to KHCloudGavlin [2011-07-27 08:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow! A smart comment

Thank you very much, my dear friend.

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KHCloudGavlin In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-27 15:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Lol, can't tell if you're being sarcastic, :-p.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to KHCloudGavlin [2011-07-27 22:06:41 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't... but I was wondering why you chose those particular words and how my piece reflected that

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KHCloudGavlin In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-28 08:06:45 +0000 UTC]

It's emotionally deep, it's very visual, and it's not censored.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to KHCloudGavlin [2011-07-28 21:55:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you for extra clarification

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ZexyPineCones [2011-07-26 02:44:40 +0000 UTC]

As it should be every night.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-26 05:03:58 +0000 UTC]

I write in the dark and my eyes
wander to crazy thoughts

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-26 13:28:39 +0000 UTC]

LOL...I've done that in the middle of the night a few times. Then I try to read it in the morning, and I'm like...WTF!!!!

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-26 21:14:57 +0000 UTC]



that's why i write in big books!
(but still, I know what you mean )

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-27 02:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Ooh...big books might be a good idea...I should try that.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-27 08:41:52 +0000 UTC]

you should definitely

try

that

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-27 13:30:35 +0000 UTC]

The results might be interesting...or scary.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-27 22:07:54 +0000 UTC]

still i want the curiosity to kill me!!

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-28 02:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Mmm...so sweet a death it would be.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-28 21:53:27 +0000 UTC]

mmm... all I can think about is icing cupcakes

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-29 13:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Really? That's not what I'm thinking of...lol.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-29 22:10:26 +0000 UTC]

(at least this one I get)

Gee I wonder how I'm going to cope with all this cupcake making...

>_>

<_<

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-30 15:00:34 +0000 UTC]

LOL...one should not have to "cope" with cupcake making.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-31 22:13:03 +0000 UTC]

i guess it depends what sort of cooking dungeon we're using!!

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-01 00:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Dark and hot!

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-08-01 03:38:23 +0000 UTC]

then i shan't forget to ice!

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-02 02:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm...pictures it melting upon your steaming...

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-08-05 00:31:54 +0000 UTC]

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-06 15:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, lick it up bitch.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-08-07 22:39:46 +0000 UTC]




(...too far?)

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-07 23:15:32 +0000 UTC]

LOL...never too far.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-08-08 23:52:46 +0000 UTC]

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-09 13:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Exactly.

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misaoseta [2011-07-26 02:05:51 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully emotionally exhausting. I love it.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to misaoseta [2011-07-26 05:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Sometimes - as you'd know - it is very exhausting...

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misaoseta In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-26 15:23:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

Definitely. XD

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