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AVolatileCalm — Cold.
Published: 2011-07-05 05:26:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description My eyes are open this morning
they snap like shattering glass
and drink the sun like desert leaves;
I sit and bask in winter's more
glorious moments
in the backyard of my earth,
and I steal its rays
as though all australians were made
equal to that of a reptiles' heart.
It speaks
in silent saps of light;
it drips
the fate of power onto my back
I feel it,
the end to a precious day
and chill enters my dress like a pervert
at a candy store
(busy shops
busy hands
the life sucked right from my eyes
and the sun laughs its way to the ends
of the world and back,
only revealing itself again
when it's over).
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Comments: 7

ZexyPineCones [2011-07-07 13:40:22 +0000 UTC]

you're wearing a dress because you're so hot? ...because you have someone's love to keep you warm? ...because you're dead? ...because you're a rebel? ...because you're special?

Love the poem and the imagery it created in my mind. It felt more refreshing than cold.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-07 23:09:38 +0000 UTC]

I am pretty hot
I don't have love other than the love of friends, which I would not trade for anything
I am half-dead last time I checked
I am definitely a rebel
Special is up for the owner's perception

Thank you
It wasn't a trick question haha, but I like that you liked it.

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-07 23:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Love the answers...and my perception.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-07-11 06:46:28 +0000 UTC]

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-07-11 13:42:26 +0000 UTC]

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KHCloudGavlin [2011-07-06 06:39:32 +0000 UTC]

I like it!

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AVolatileCalm In reply to KHCloudGavlin [2011-07-07 23:07:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear ^_^

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