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AVolatileCalm — baby the river runs
Published: 2011-08-05 07:20:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I fall

I fall onto wetted knees
on an angle that will not let me

escape;

tumble

fractured ice-queen kisses
bringing me to a soft and reddened
dampened skin,

with a river of slow death
holding me
sealing my duct with a tear.
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Comments: 12

ZexyPineCones [2011-08-06 15:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Where are you getting these prompts from? And I love this!!!

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AVolatileCalm In reply to ZexyPineCones [2011-08-07 22:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

where am I getting these prompts? silly question you of course

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ZexyPineCones In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-07 23:17:19 +0000 UTC]

LOL...

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misaoseta [2011-08-05 16:15:54 +0000 UTC]

"on an angle that will not let me

escape;" is really beautiful, a trembling climb.

I like the prompt!

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AVolatileCalm In reply to misaoseta [2011-08-06 05:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
There's 4 prompts in total, and they actually form a complete sentence
I just couldn't think that deeply about a whole sentence! So I broke it up

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misaoseta In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-08 04:57:53 +0000 UTC]

I want to write from a prompt! How do you acquire these things? :0

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AVolatileCalm In reply to misaoseta [2011-08-08 08:44:29 +0000 UTC]

haha ^_^ too cute...

I got my sentence from one of my other good friends - *4moku2 - maybe he can help you out?
*shrugs* all I said was that I was lost for words give me some....

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misaoseta In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-08 19:30:46 +0000 UTC]

♥!
can you give me words? (:

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AVolatileCalm In reply to misaoseta [2011-08-09 06:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...

What about this:

"I smile at the sun while drowning in a river of weeds"

Just tell me if it's not good enough and I'll think up something better. LUCK!

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misaoseta In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-09 22:28:39 +0000 UTC]

I love this. I'm using it.

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AVolatileCalm In reply to misaoseta [2011-08-09 22:31:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome! can't wait to see what potential you've raked from it!

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misaoseta In reply to AVolatileCalm [2011-08-11 03:38:34 +0000 UTC]

i will show you, quite soon!

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