lighthouse-beacon [2012-05-22 03:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, my... Daniel reminds me of... several people that I know... I like how you did him. Alright, this isn't really much of a literary suggestion, but it would really help if you separated the two points of view with a dash or something. That's all for this one.
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Aw3someSauce In reply to lighthouse-beacon [2012-05-28 22:17:22 +0000 UTC]
On my computer there was a biiiiiig space in between the characters perspectives, but for some unknown reason DeviantArt hates my computer.....
lighthouse-beacon In reply to Aw3someSauce [2012-06-13 17:36:16 +0000 UTC]
oh, haha. It does that to me to sometimes...
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