Comments: 8
Taiwan-ah-shin [2008-03-09 17:08:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you,, Yours are beautiful too! (Sorry for the mistakes when I speak because I'm french :S) I love what you do !
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xMAnimeArtist81x [2008-02-15 21:40:59 +0000 UTC]
I hope you don't mind if I offer some critique. I'll assume you won't, since there is no "Critique discouraged" mark on the comment box...
I think your art could stand to have a few references before you begin drawing. Her pose is extremely awkward; she's standing as if she's been starched. Her head is misshapen; the hair doesn't fallow the rest of the head and looks as if it's been glued on backwards. Her jaw is very large and square; not feminine at all. Her hands are too small and so are her feet, and the legs have curves in all the wrong places; her thighs are quite narrow and she doesn't appear to have hips. Her eyes are especially weird looking; her eyebrows are on a weird slant and the outline of the upper eyelid makes her look like her eyes are pasted on.
Second, what's going on with the shading? Her skin is flat, and so is her top and skirt, yet her hair, boots and the bows all have highlights on them but no shadow. Not to mention that the highlights aren't done properly on the bows; they don't fallow the folds of the fabric.
Last, the inking is poorly done. I would look up tutorials, if I were you, for coloring, line art and anatomy, in order to improve my work.
However, I really like the background. As a fellow user of The GIMP, what effects did you use to produce that swirl/gradient?
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awren In reply to xMAnimeArtist81x [2008-02-16 02:50:52 +0000 UTC]
First of all, I'd like to thank you greatly for you're critique. I know that this isn't the absolute best, and I definetly need some work. So thank you for being blatantly honest.
Secondly, for the background, I used the gradient tool. First, I picked the colors, by double clicking on the GIMP too menu, and picking the color. Then, on the GIMP menu, I clicked on the gradient tool (not on the window that shows the layers) and chose to have the Foreground to background gradient, and under the options, (where it says linear) I changed it to Spiral (cw). Then, I clicked where I wanted the epicenter, and drug it out to the bottom right. And BOOM! You've got the background. (This is all done on a separate layer, btw )
And again, thank you for the critique. It's comments like these that I truly enjoy getting (Oh, and thanks for not flaming me in the process )
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