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Golnoush-1397 [2013-03-16 05:17:59 +0000 UTC]

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I really like the way you drew the lines , all messy and cool! I think if you would add a little bit more lines to his hair and make the red lines a little bit thicker it would be nice. Working a little bit more on the trees would also be good. Like using two dark green colors, and use the darker one for shadows . oh! and writing the date under your name at the bottom of every drawing or painting - even if you don't like one and think it's not good art piece but you will keep it anyways - would be good! Last but not least , I like the dark feeling your painting gives to the viewer! Keep up the good work!

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Golnoush-1397 In reply to Golnoush-1397 [2013-03-19 05:07:29 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure! I hope it helped you a bit ^_^

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AxelOfArt In reply to Golnoush-1397 [2013-03-16 05:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Hee, thank you for the critique.
While he doesn't have hair, I do think maybe some more time should have been spent on facial definition
I have never been good at trees =B
Thank you. The dark feeling above all, is what I wanted to put into this one
That reminds me, thank you, I forgot to date this

Thank you!

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