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Sorcaron [2013-10-13 01:08:12 +0000 UTC]

I really love the way Holly came out on this page. The top panel looks a bit like Abbot pulled the sword out (which, I can't remember if he did or not), but it works just as effectively anyways. I really like the angle that Holly's at for the first panel though. Though I must say that it's a bit odd for her to be lacking eyes completely, at least with that much of her forehead showing?? idk. If you do something similar in the future, I don't know if putting some shadows where the eyes are helps with that at all.

And I really love the detail for her uniform on the bottom panel too.

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DrippingFlames [2013-10-12 05:25:02 +0000 UTC]

I love this scene.

I REALLY don't know what you're talking about.

The movement is very well implied and I like the way she is falling off the sword.

Don't ask why. I really don't know.

But it looks so GOOD.

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LyokoDoReMi [2013-10-08 20:26:33 +0000 UTC]

This is probably my favorite out of all your pages. I love the shadows in the last panel compared to in the first one. Holly's expression is really phenomenal too. I don't really know WHY I love this page so much, but I think you just grabbed the emotions really well and it's really a "oh gosh this is real" sort of moment.

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DEAFHPN [2013-10-08 05:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow this is done amazingly I just want to read it all eye twitch the comic is so beautifully done ;d 

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