Comments: 52
Sentriiel [2018-07-15 18:07:19 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I'm from
I just want to start by saying that this is an absolutely gorgeous drawing. The colors you used, how vibrant they are, how pretty her hair is, it's all so lovely. I really adore your color choices, with the pinks and purples and how well they contrast with the black. It stands out a lot and really catches the eye. I also really love the way you drew this, how there isn't really an outline like in most pieces I see. Instead, you drew everything just with the colors, which is really cool and something I haven't seen much, but would really like to try! Her hair is a great example of this - it has no outline, but you used the different colors to add details and strands and it works really well. Her wings are absolutely gorgeous, and I love how bright you made them, to really stand out against the background and the rest of the colors of the piece. I also really like the flowers in her hair, there's a lot of detail there and they're really pretty.
One thing I find myself wondering about is that her face and hair are bright, vibrant, and clearly stand out, but her clothes and body, since they're just colored with black, kinda fade away into the background, and you can't really tell what is what, except for the arm, which has proportions that seem a little off for her body. My other criticism is the top of the drawing, where the splatter background kinda fades away into this blurry bar - there's a definitely line where it changes. I'm not sure if this was a style/design choice or what, but it's a little strange to look at.
Other than that, this is a really lovely drawing, and I really enjoyed commenting on this one!
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ArtOfRemedy [2018-06-25 16:11:19 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I'm from and I'll post a critique on your artwork :3
This piece really caught my attention because of the contrast: the light pinks directly next to the blacks make the drawing pop and look really interesting.
I think the grungy style you chose for this drawing looks really nice and also fits to the theme "mentality".
It's really interesting how your drawing looks somewhat blurry, while the important things like single hair strands are still defined; you definitely nailed that style!
The colors harmonize with each other really well.
I've been wondering about the arm: is the arm from the girl? Because if yes, thenthe proportions aren't alright; it's to chubby for the girl and also looks strange in general. If it's not the girl's arm, where does it come from? Either way, it stands out in a strange way and doesn't fit to the style of the other parts of your drawing.
Though I really like the splatter effects in the background, which look kind of organic (is she in a forest or something?), I think this "edge" on the upper side of the drawing, where the defined splatters abruptly fade nto some blurry dots, does not look goot. I think if you'd just continued with the splatters, it would've looked better.
One last thing you could work on is the details, but not just anywhere: I think you should add more details to the face. The girl lookes really pale and there is no shadow for the nose...it looks like a mask or something like that ^^
Maybe this was intentional, so if it's meant to be that way, then don't change it of couse ^^
I really like your drawing ^^
Keep up the great work!
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ZafiraStarlight [2018-06-19 15:28:58 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love the grungy style! The color palette makes the picture really pop and catches the viewers attention. I do enjoy how the background just fits with the girl in the picture. All in all it is a really good picture, but I do suggest to working more on making certain aspects more defined.
The way you incorporated "paint" splatters into the piece really caught my eye, especially how it added more dept and perspective to the piece. Also the amount of focus that went into the flower in the girls hair is absolutely amazing, I love the fact that you chose to sort of ombre the colors from a light pinkish color to a purple, while also added a small dash of blue.
I also enjoy the fact that you can actually see hair strands, I have noticed that a lot of artist don't really pay all that much attention to hair.
I also love the translucent effect of the wings, they pop with the background colors, while also being subtle. The translucent effect creates a really neat effect that causes the viewers to actually have to pay attention to the detail in the picture, while leading the viewers eyes to examine the entire piece, the picture really shows your talent. I hope you continue with such great work!
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Aya-DNA In reply to ZafiraStarlight [2018-06-23 09:37:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh my thank you so much for your nice comment it is an honor to get it, and I will try my best tough, thank you *w*)9
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WhiteLiar13 [2018-06-10 11:43:59 +0000 UTC]
really amazing art
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Midway2009 In reply to Aya-DNA [2018-06-06 03:32:05 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
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Eriaricheria [2018-06-05 14:46:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very creative!
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JMBdraws [2018-06-05 09:16:22 +0000 UTC]
Pretty
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Aya-DNA In reply to JMBdraws [2018-06-05 10:41:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
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Munpyro [2018-06-05 09:03:15 +0000 UTC]
omg, it's so beautiful!
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Aya-DNA In reply to Munpyro [2018-06-05 09:09:06 +0000 UTC]
thank yoou, glad you like it ;w;/
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Munpyro In reply to Aya-DNA [2018-06-05 09:14:28 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
you are just an amazing artist <3
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Aya-DNA In reply to Munpyro [2018-06-05 10:41:35 +0000 UTC]
OMG THANK YOU AGAIN
your comment make my day aaaaaaaa ;;;;;w;;;;;
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Munpyro In reply to Aya-DNA [2018-06-05 11:55:48 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I'm glad that my comment made your day :3
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Aya-DNA In reply to Munpyro [2018-06-05 21:29:53 +0000 UTC]
aaaaaaa :'D
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Akkaifox [2018-06-05 06:10:40 +0000 UTC]
This is fantastic and has such a surreal, dark, yet pastel feel. I absolutely love the song as well. Overall this is super well done!
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CharaYui [2018-06-05 01:20:14 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT¡¡¡
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Aya-DNA In reply to CharaYui [2018-06-05 08:40:05 +0000 UTC]
AAA THANK YOOU ;w;
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MasterRJ [2018-06-04 11:24:23 +0000 UTC]
This is such a breathtakingly beautiful and deep drawing!!!
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Aya-DNA In reply to MasterRJ [2018-06-04 14:01:51 +0000 UTC]
OMG thank you so much for your comment ;w;
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MasterRJ In reply to Aya-DNA [2018-06-04 15:04:43 +0000 UTC]
You are so welcome! Thank you for drawing this!
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LadySeegard [2018-06-04 10:56:31 +0000 UTC]
i love the colours of this piece!
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ChibiWyndo [2018-06-04 09:26:50 +0000 UTC]
nice!
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