Comments: 11
XSamuraiEdgeX [2015-06-13 10:27:38 +0000 UTC]
pfft leon you whimp, you weren't like that in the game. you keep getting yourself in shit without complaining.
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CLaire135 [2011-11-10 07:15:34 +0000 UTC]
this is so nice!! o=
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CrabOtto [2011-11-01 13:07:18 +0000 UTC]
nice,except for the Jill's face.It's always creeps me out.She's almost everywhere got a guffy smile and on the last pics where is writen ''we are not going back now'' she's damn scary >_> like saying to Leon with dat face "shut the f*** up,we are not going back now,gees" I swear >_>
You should work on the emotions.
thought everything else is kinda cute.
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NodAvatar1985 [2011-10-24 11:06:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh, my God, Aydean!!!! There are no words to express, how great your story is! You have made an excellent job with the script, and I can tell you that it's getting more and more exciting!! This particular page also gave me good ideas, and to tell you the truth, you're very resourceful! I laughed a lot on the "water-avoiding" scene, it was very familiar, because I can swim, however I don't like water! Anyway, I hope that Leon and Jill won't be separated for too long! Take care of them, my friend!
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Taraevyn [2011-10-24 08:14:05 +0000 UTC]
Great as usual! I just love how Leon's afraid of going in the water part XD looking forward to the next part!
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