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Published: 2013-04-07 11:28:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1562; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Now show me the way..Im freeCOPYRIGHTΒ© Ouertani Aymen
Tools: Photoshop cs6
Website: [link]
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*Model: [link]
** Cage: [link]
*** Rope: [link]
****texture: [link]
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Comments: 34
With a little more work this could be a bit better, though it looks like a nice start to me.
It looks a little odd that the pieces inside this have their own shading. I agree with the critiques you've already gotten and suggest that you work with the light on this--provided you intend to work on this exact piece again! It also looks like the model needs something in her hands to show the wind as she escapes, perhaps to act as something of a parachute so she could land safely?
And I like your background but I'd suggest doing something so that the escapee doesn't meld in so much--but I like your colors that you've chosen too because it almost looks like she's hiding in her escape...
Plus I find it really interesting how she's flying into the shadowy space on the right. Makes me wonder if she's flying into the unknown or if she's soon to get into some type of trouble because she escaped the safety of the cage!
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I love the idea of breaking out of a cage and being free - flying away. I would have liked to see more effort in visual effects though, maybe a glowing light to show that there are representational wings growing as she leaves.
The pictures just look like they were cut out and pasted... this reason is because of all the different light sources. The ropes light source is the upper left, the girls light source is bottom left, and the cage is somewhere between a straight on flash or it slanted to the left, its hard to tell from the shadow going to the right.
I like the background but not with this picture, she blends into it and it is not as realistic as everything else.
The color choices are good, I believe you took a tan out of the cage and made it apart of the background so it coordinated- which is a good idea. Possibly adding a background that was not flat like where the originals came from it would look better.
That being said the symbolism of having a rough background symbolizing just because you left does not mean the journey will be easy is cool.
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I like the concept, but the execution is a bit flawed. I think you need to consider the background, it's really rough and distracts from the entire photo. I probably would of went with a very flat color for the background and focused on creating the woman jumping as a focal point. Placement is important as well. It's good to break the rule of thirds sometimes, but this manipulation would of been perfect for following this rule with the highly textured background. The concept though, is brilliant and I think it's a very imaginative piece that with the right execution, would be a wonderful artistic offering.
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Actually i did two version of this..one with a textured background and the other one with simple background which i will upload later..that s mean i share you opinion and i agree with!! thak you for stopping by and thank you so much for your critique, that really means a lot to me 
best Regards
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This is very pretty, I like the use of texture here.
The consept is really nice, but since I think she will just fall, i also makes me it sad.
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I love photomanipulations! Wish I was able to afford photoshop so I can create more digital art and get better. You have done very well with this piece I think
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My pleasure it is beautiful
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thank you so much : )
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