firesaber16985 [2003-01-07 14:16:49 +0000 UTC]
The repetition of the "slows down" lines definately make it seem to slow down, at least in my mind. I love this.
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zuzi [2003-01-07 01:21:19 +0000 UTC]
*le sigh* Oh the shippyness of it all. Mmmmm, I love a good romantic poem. Ahh... anyways... enough of that, it's a great poem. -Zuzi!-