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Description Light dances across it
all alone in the night
a glowing sun makes
a dizzy passage across
the still blue sphere

They have called it a marble
So Peaceful.

within it, a green pattern
plays in numbers
on screen, on eyes.

So blue in the gold light
more golden than memory
Holy Radiant Light

They Smile.

My voice sings
in a choir in his ear
We are with him now
-with them now.

The songs echo
a time in a land more golden
than dreaming
Vicina all'elemento del fuoco

eyes catch a glitch in the green
pattern
the screen questions and
goes dark
all dark
in one.

Bright flash across the sky
a dual vapor-trail with no
head
The cry builds up
and in a moment breaks free
in the shadow of a sunny day

we gather as
Leonardo's pigeons, waiting,
the screen white with snow
unfallen, until he moves the antenna and the color
at least
comes in
The grit of frost remains.

We huddle in the sudden cold
the silence sings
Eli...Eli...

A day passes
fogged over by falling
stardust
Sacrament: Body, Blood
in my hand, a reminder
for the sake of Choirrobes,
more golden than
the Tuscan sunrise.

The choir echoes

The ears that heard it
spinning home, across the heavens.
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Comments: 3

zuzi [2003-02-12 16:51:57 +0000 UTC]

*sobs* This is beautiful.... I hate crying, but when I do, it's because I've been moved to tears... this my dear has moved me. Very beautiful. Peace be with you and those who've lost loves in the shuttle disaster.

-Zuzi!-

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piqument [2003-02-11 09:49:48 +0000 UTC]

You can FTP to certain web accounts. However, we can find out of the comps in the atlc have an ftp program: I know that I do, and you could just store there. Also, if you can FTP, it doesn't matter if their servers allow directory listings.


I read more of a celebration into it. Is "Choirrobes" supposed to be Choir robes?" The "Eli Eli" I could hear in my head the sounds of the birds crying overhead the standing bodies of the singers. In this I can almost see creation. Singing takes you places.

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echo-si [2003-02-03 22:32:16 +0000 UTC]

beautiful imagery here, and a very clear and sad sentiment...

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