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OK ok! I know this was puplished in 2013, and it's been a while and you've probably developed alot since!
Either way, here is some critiques.
I couldn't help but notice the lack of armor... I know I know! This is fantasy ! but.... I don't know if you wanted to make her sexy and special, which it is ofcourse. But logically (In my opinion) i think it would be more dramatic and cooler if she had more armor, and it would also look like you've used more time to it.
The colours are great, but the lack of shadows, in some areas are a little bit weak.
The ground doesn't have much detail, just a little bit of clutter would've been drasticly better!
And my last sentence of critique; The sparks: If there would have been more glow in some areas and blurr as if it was close to the screen it would have been alot better! (in my opinion!)
Overall this painting is absolutely one of the best works I have seen!
Please anyone who thinks my critiques was too harsh or offensive, this is just my opinion, you may think differently. Thank you for reading.
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everything ZychoArt said is correct with one exception.The wounded warrior could have taken her armor off then got shot afterwards however drawing the armor in the picture would have been an nice touch but it is what it is..lol
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The lack of armor, I believe, was the point of the piece. She is a "Wounded Warrior" who would not have been wounded had she been sufficiently armored against attack.
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The bikini armor generally makes the wearer invincible, and here is one of its rare instances of failure.
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Would really love to see more sad, but sexy death images like this one. Well, I'm assuming she is going to die of these wounds?
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A Tragic Beauty! The expression, the detail, the sense of hopelessness..... Touching man!
Great work!
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Oh no. I instantly felt sorry for her, later appreciating the damage to her top but seeing the cuts, broken sword and sad expression. Nice emotion.
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I have to agree with the person who did the critique.
I also have something to add-
if you don't want to give her normal metal armor, that would bind down her breasts, I would suggest leather armor- but with metal intermixed.
I've seen it before. It works for light stuff
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im sorry but all I see is a girl that inspired herself waaayyy to much of video games for her armor
and is sad to realize that wearing less, doesn't make her stronger
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i feel guilty for being aroused since she's in such a morbid, vunerable state
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Holy crap this is amazing even though it's one of your older works. The look of desperation on her face is intense
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Awesome. Your ability to express such vulnerability and emotion in your characters is heart wrenching here. Love it!
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Прекрасная картина! Прямо хотелось бы серию.
Красивую в сражении, неожиданные раны, падение...
А еще не очень понятна кожа доспеха, разорванная на груди: если поперек груди ударили - там рана должна быть и не эстетично. Или так резко выгнулась, когда стрелы попали, что порвала?
Как там по авторской задумке?
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Definite fave for me, top quality artwork this.
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I don't believe she walked into the battlefield in just rags and leather look at her pauldrons they appear to be made out of metal it's possible she was well wearinga breastplate and it was sundered off of her, besides who the hell cares what she was wearing what she was wearing isn't going to stop me from rushing to her rescue!
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What's ironic is, she got shot in the only place where she is wearing armor
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Everything looks awesome!!! I have only one concern... Did she survived???
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how could anyone survive with an armor like that :1
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See Girl! You really should have had more Armor!
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I bet she wishes she wore full body armor ahahahah! I LOVE THIS!
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Maybe if she had more armor on her she'd be better off xD
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What a stunningly intense scene, simply great.
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She's tough, I bet she will continue fighting... I'll volunteer to nurse her back to health after XD
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Hi.
First of all I want to say that I can see that you're talented and that the piece is well composed and has great coloring.
I would like to question your choice of motive tho, as I quickly scrolled through some of the comments to see if anyone else reacted on this I saw you write that this was a suggestion from a friend. I also noticed several people pointing out the lack of her armor and I would have done that too, but my main question is: Why did you portray a dying, very lightly clothed woman in a sexy pose? Sexy + defenseless and dying doesn't make sense to me.
Thank you for your time.
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Great work! I like her expression and the ruggedness of the pic..
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well this is awkward. exactly why women warrior should wear more protection, right? lol
nice work !
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