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MegaJani27 [2016-06-05 07:02:04 +0000 UTC]
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AzaleaCloud In reply to MegaJani27 [2016-06-07 03:24:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm not really knowledgeable about guns, so I'm just gonna say use your imagination on this one. >.>
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Theopenandclosedbook [2011-08-04 23:28:32 +0000 UTC]
Out of intrest, is that writing on the gun barrel and if so, what does it say?
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Jeffanime [2011-07-17 02:49:35 +0000 UTC]
epic! Nice detail on the suit!
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HiddenSanity [2011-07-16 05:05:54 +0000 UTC]
I shall restate my desire to see more things designed by Shivites for Shivites... Yes, I confess, as good as the rest of the picture is, I'm most interested by the way somethings designed for a different body-type.
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EnigmaticThief [2011-07-09 05:13:43 +0000 UTC]
Alright, now I finally feel it's okay to give my commentary on this piece. I was worried for a bit that the help you got from the other forumers might turn into a "too many chefs in the kitchen" situation, but thankfully that wasn't the case.
I really like all the small touches you managed to incorporate into Jillian's armor. One point that stands out are the protrusions that line key points like across her shoulders and down the front of her thighs. In addition to matching the point you made about a design that catered to deflecting blunt weaponry, it also helps to give each piece extra depth and definition. The modifications you've made to her weapon are expertly accented by its coloration. Your addition of small details in red and yellow further down the barrel help to incorporate the rocket pod into the overall design, which might otherwise stick out like a sore thumb. Your addition of the cluster of bombs attached to her belt also help to give the image more life; their movement cues in the viewer to movement in her body at large, and it's easy to imagine her in the middle of making a quick turn to her right in order to line up a target.
Small details that could be improved include her upper left hand and the design on the rocket pod. For the former, her pinky seems a bit too long, perhaps from emphasis on its nail, and it throws off the proportions of her other fingers on the barrel. For the latter, the way you have the pattern now, with each square bordered after inking, gives the impression of separate tiles when it should be a contiguous piece of metal with the design painted on top of it. These are nothing bit, however, and don't interfere with the overall impression of the piece. You worked long and hard to improve upon your original concept, and it shows. Good job, Az!
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Monkey-Zombie [2011-07-07 10:22:48 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome for it just being a shivite. I wonder what one would look like in a 'fallout' kinda setting.
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Pim18 [2011-07-07 08:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Looks very good!
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10110100 [2011-07-06 23:12:41 +0000 UTC]
Shame there's no Mythbusters on this week. >_<
But that gun has quite a lot of power in a smallish package.
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AzaleaCloud In reply to 10110100 [2011-07-07 01:19:52 +0000 UTC]
No there isn't any MythBusters on this week, and I'm very saddened by that. :<
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