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Published: 2008-03-23 05:57:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 584; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description As we walked though the forest we came to a spot that was dark. We could tell it only led to more and more shadowed woods. It was later in the day and getting cold. We had chores to do at home. Home was a few hours away. If we left now we could make it back before supper.
"Bobby, look it almost seems as if it is a castle" I said curiously. Bob just rolled his eyes and had let out a sarcastic "wow." I could tell he was getting annoyed and didn't want to get in trouble for not finishing our chores earlier. So We started heading back.

After two more hours of walking, we started to see just over the hill, the top point of the house. It was three stories not including the basement and had been in the family for generations.


---------------------Sorry folks I have to get going to bed, I hope what I wrote is okay, I just started typing. I will try to get you more into the story when I get the chance to.

~Tash
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Comments: 10

ObtuseBucket [2009-02-21 10:00:15 +0000 UTC]

It looks dark and inviting... wow. I liked the story. I hope there is more.

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Aziot In reply to ObtuseBucket [2009-02-25 02:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it, I'll see what I can do about the story. I have to remember what my idea was lol. Haven't thought about it much since that day.

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ObtuseBucket In reply to Aziot [2009-02-25 03:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Well, you did write it a while ago.

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Stefa-Heart [2008-03-24 02:46:23 +0000 UTC]

That is so cool. Usually it is REALLY difficult to make a straight-on type photo work, but you most definitely did make it work. The lighting and set up of the trees is VERY impressive!

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Aziot In reply to Stefa-Heart [2008-03-24 23:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuuu

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Hopealotaless [2008-03-23 13:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Awesome picture! The story is pretty cool too.

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Hopealotaless In reply to Hopealotaless [2008-04-05 22:54:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.
I don't think so.

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Aziot In reply to Hopealotaless [2008-03-23 16:42:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

I think it would be a whole lot better when I get to the point haha.

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Venomous-Flames [2008-03-23 07:24:18 +0000 UTC]

i like this very much
has a nice classy look to it !
the tree lines are very good as i said some time ago, there's nothing like tree silhouettes against the pale horizon.

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Aziot In reply to Venomous-Flames [2008-03-30 08:33:43 +0000 UTC]

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