L33TM4573R [2013-04-10 22:30:33 +0000 UTC]
-Loves to help artists- Okay I know i may sound like a criticizer... But i can help you a lot.. Okay you know the top of yoru head make it more of a "O" shape, Have it a little more back. like the top left one looks fine because the out line of the head is not there... The jaws Look a bit too realistic. make it where the neck is back some more and have the jaw curve up slightly. I really like your art style and i need to also tell you that there is a line bace with cheeks ears and eyes. The top of the ear should match some where close with the top of the eye (eyebrow slightly above it) Cheek and nose are lined up and should be at the bottom of the ear.But other than that how far i see how you work seems realy nice I love your hair..Maybe if you are shading work on it just a little.Another helpful thing is you should look up some base picture of characters and try the Circle method on them[link] <-- That should be about what you should see if you have circled bases or normal anime pics on top of them Also reminder if i had made you made I am sorry. I hope this helps.
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L33TM4573R In reply to L33TM4573R [2013-04-15 18:49:17 +0000 UTC]
Huh?
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AzumiLeijonMakara In reply to L33TM4573R [2013-04-10 22:44:29 +0000 UTC]
wooow O: I never received a critique of my drawings, but thanks for the comment and will try to take a lot into account your opinion.
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L33TM4573R In reply to AzumiLeijonMakara [2013-04-12 21:50:00 +0000 UTC]
^^ Sorry if you think im being a poser... I just havent loaded up anything on dA for a while..
AzumiLeijonMakara In reply to L33TM4573R [2013-04-15 17:15:56 +0000 UTC]
O.O And that?