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Published: 2012-05-26 15:16:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 6
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Vent art...Heaven bend to take my hand and lead me through the fire
Be the long awaited answer to a long and painful fight
Truth be told I tried my best
But somewhere along the way, I got caught up in all there was to offer
But the cost was so much more than I could bear
Though I've tried,
I've fallen
I have sunk so low
I messed up
Better I should know
So don't come 'round here and
Tell me I told you so
We all begin with good intent
When love was raw and young
We believe that we can change ourselves
The past can be undone
But we carry on our back the burdens time always reveals
In the lonely light of morning
In the wound that would not heal
It's the bitter taste of losing everything
I've held so dear
Oh,
Heaven bend to take my hand
I've nowhere left to turn
I'm lost to those I thought were friends
To everyone I know
Oh they turn their heads, embarrassed
Pretend that they don't see
That it's one miss step, one slip, before you know it
And there doesn't seem a way to be redeemed
Though I've tried,
Oh,
I've messed up
Better I should know
Don't come 'round here and
Tell me I told you so
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i cant critique but 5 stars 
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That is the most beautiful poem I have ever read. This picture is wonderful too. If you need to talk I am here you know. I just want you to feel better k
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Its still beautiful. XD what's the name of it?
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SKaella..... <3 Its beautiful... It just captures the eye. It does. And it is an amzing picture, but i dont think your in a very beautiful condiition right now. .> Luckily. But im here. This is a magnificant piece. And the emotion is defenitly noticeable. But look times will get better. You will get through your rough spots. They are only what make you stronger. And i know you might here that a lot but hun its true. Youll get through the rough times and in the end your the beatiful person we all know and love. Trust. Look Skaella. Your beautiful inside and out. We all know this! And its time you should finally relize you are what you say you are. I know it doesnt matter what other people say. Think of yourself as you! You deserve to be the beautiful person you are. And no one should stop you from doing that. << Damn i wrote a lot. But look what im trying to say is no matter what anyone tells you, your a beautiful person. And you should know that. Im not saying listen to me either but just keep in mind that you are a great person. And you deserve better then what condtion your in now
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:] :Heart I hope that you can see what we see. <3
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np ^-^ you improve so fast! it amazing o.O i wish i could improve too xD but even if i practice, im still at the same points XD
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No what the hell are you saying ? You are improving!
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haha well not like you XD im still far away from you! but it better liek this ^-^
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cleary not XD look at your animal XD i can'T do that XD
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Different style but yours is better -3-
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*totaly disagree* do a pool and you will see that you style is better then mine X D
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well you make one 
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