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Philoscircles [2012-09-16 13:51:45 +0000 UTC]

hmkay...

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aniwablue [2012-09-13 15:28:17 +0000 UTC]

And sorry, I forget the emoticon!

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aniwablue [2012-09-13 15:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I read already this chapter long ago, but I wanted to read it again, just to find the good words to comment it!
... Like always, your story looks like a miniature of the Earth... To many people...! I'm happy they don't do like the Chinese, but same... construct a bigger planet? That wasn't a bad idea... but when we look the consequence...
And I didn't understand well the link between Dave in the "thing", the planet... He talk with the heart of the planet? Or he had a imaginery friend? Of course, I believe in the spirit of the planet, of course! That's just... surprise! You know what? The planet have a spirit! And only Dave could see it! Strange, but I'm not so surprise...!
For Anti-Dave, it's quite sad... Now, he's acting like a God, but he don't forget how people treat him... and for that, he wanted to destroy them all...
But if only Dave would be able to understand he had to listen these people... but now, he's obsess by the spirit in his object...! In this way, I understand so well his idea to not create a another one...! That's kinda sad, same...
But one thing the spirit is true... Dave is love... Same if he wasn't listening for these people, in the start... Same if he couldn't save these people he tried... but Anti-Dave arrived and said he was doing that only to save the object. What a final dramatic...! How sad I felt after reading it!
I was scare to read the next...! Really! I don't want all these poors little guys die... It's just like we could see how world being destroy by having too must people!
But he should create age, and make die people when they became older! Of course, that sad!
Me, I was thinking when I start to read the problem the narrator should suggest it to Dave... But he's looking like he had dissapear! How that... Surely because the other chapter before...!
I'm going to read the next chapter...! I hope better things will happen...! What will do Dave and Anti-Dave?

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megpie252 [2012-09-01 23:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, now this chapter is interesting... There's no longer such a clear difference as to what defines Dave as opposed to Anti-Dave.
I am a little confused about who the floating face is. Is that intentional, or did I miss something?

Also I think there's a couple places where the speech bubbles overlap with the panel lines.

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rosecat13 [2012-08-29 23:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Does it end on page 25 or am I experiencing technical difficulties?

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