aniwablue [2013-07-27 00:52:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow, fantastic!
I read already your last chapter, it's true, but I decide to wait and read them again before to comment...! I was so sad to see the end of the adventure, so soon... Same, there's still hope, at the end of the chapter I read! (There's still a little white one...! Because of the sacrifice of Fred...! This was touching...!
Your story is so developped...! Very well done! I hope I could comment it better, but I would prefer to read it again, just to be sure to not forget something important...!
You do a fantastic job! Take your time to finish the great adventure of Dave, Anti-Dave and all the others...! What will happens to the narrator, too? I'm curious!
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