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constantron [2012-09-04 05:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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Kevcatalan [2010-06-23 02:09:31 +0000 UTC]

This is by far one of your best works yet, I'm loving everything about it.
As for crits, i can't really see anything wrong except for things mentioned in other comments. Except maybe in the first panel, try to smooth out the blots of black in the backround. I know its hard to get a perfect coat of black using traditional means, but it can be fixed digitaly. And it almost seems like you were in a hurry to fill the spaces in. Other than that, AMAZING work once again.

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Marvin000 [2010-05-23 16:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey Raul, nice job on the atmosphere for page 2, good continuation of, what you established on page 1.

On page 1 and on most panels on page 2, you have Constantine on the left hand side, facing the right. Even on the inset panels 2 & 4, the demon's hand makes you think it is on the right looking to the left.

Then for some odd reason, in panel 5, you've got the demon looking on the left hand side facing the right now, which is very confusing and distracting to the viewer.

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dangel88 [2010-05-22 21:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Simply mind blowing. The detail in this page is something you'd have to pay the earth for with illustrators now-a-days and frankly most of them wouldn't have the skill to do it.

It's nice to see an awesomely drawn comic page that has great panelling: easy to follow, an idea that you've really made your own and a style that works with the medium used. Even the easily missed detail of giving the characters a white outline adds to the quality of the image and this is something that many amateur illustrators miss.

All I'd recommend is that it might look a little more realistic if the person who is talking in the image has movement in the lips i,e mouth open or snarled or something, just to connect the speech bubble and character together a little more.


But honestly that's all, it's fab. Well done!

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