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JayTheGhostBoy [2017-04-14 15:43:00 +0000 UTC]
you have a great group characters
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altback [2017-01-06 02:47:25 +0000 UTC]
love the gestures.
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PotatoDrawing [2016-12-08 22:09:15 +0000 UTC]
These characters look so fun, and the poses! So nice!!
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EldaGoddess [2016-12-08 18:25:44 +0000 UTC]
Such good sketches. The bodies' fluidity is really excellent. Only one thing, sometimes I noticed that you exceed on the head's dimensions, at least to me they seems too much bigger than the bodies. Good job anyway.
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BabanIllustration In reply to EldaGoddess [2016-12-08 21:29:59 +0000 UTC]
thanks!! and yeah i'm workin' on proportions now, i tend to make the heads larger if they're a smaller part of an overall thing?? i think it's something to do with how i zoom in quite a bit with digital and that skewing my perception of proportions. ty for sharing though, i knew it looked off but i don't get many people pointing out things that look off in my stuff.
yeah it's the next thimg i'm working on along with legs lol. i like the average of around 5 heads tall but i'm struggling with how wide i want to make the shoulders and all??
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EldaGoddess In reply to BabanIllustration [2016-12-09 11:18:50 +0000 UTC]
My suggestion is to see the characters' body (with head) in the fullest before and after you've finished the draw. Keep track of the proportions by putting always an eye on the metric numbers of the lines.
Another good thing is to keep an eye on a normal pic of the human's structure, always with the subject turned in front of you, so that even when you make characters turned on more directions, you can have an idea of the dimensions. Making a confrontation with others draws which have good proportions or even real photos is useful too.
Mine are only suggestions but -as I said before- these are only little things that can be solved in a short time and I appreciate that you haven't take those as insults -like some probably would-. Continue on this way. =]
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BabanIllustration In reply to EldaGoddess [2016-12-09 20:18:36 +0000 UTC]
yeah i do zoom out to look at then fully but i think maybe i should clean up my aketches more?? like i can't really tell if everything is correct until i line it and it's frustrating? i think part of it is the fact that i draw on a cintiq though and zooming out makes everything more pixelated so i do have to zoom in a lot to draw anything and have it be accurate?
i have been measuring things in how many heads tall which s helping since i have trouble with legs but like i said i'm strugglng with how wide to make them.
which ones on this sheet look ok if any of them do?? i know which ones look bad but i'm just assuming all of them look off now.
yeah i'll try that! the main reason i don't is because if i have references i tend to rely on them too heavily and mess up, and i try to do finished stuff without reference so that i learn to do things from imagination, even if it is really difficult, i try and keep using references to when i'm studying.
taht and that i'm trying to stylise everything and don't want the usual proporyions, i'm trying to figure out what looks best for my style? i'm also trying to go for more simplified proportions for smaller figures just so they come across easier when tehy are smaller compared to otehr things around them?
i think my main trouble is legs because i have proportions down ok-ish for anything above them
((some ref sheets i've done))
babakinkin.deviantart.com/art/…
babakinkin.deviantart.com/art/…
and no thanks i love getting helpful comments!! dw i'm not the type to flip out over genuine helpful criticism lol.
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EldaGoddess In reply to BabanIllustration [2016-12-10 21:47:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure that with patience and some time you will improve great. Glad to be helpful lol.
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User-2018225d [2016-12-08 01:12:04 +0000 UTC]
Why the only unclothed person gotta be black? (Also, this is amaziing. Motion looks very fluid.)
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BabanIllustration In reply to User-2018225d [2016-12-08 01:15:30 +0000 UTC]
leave tofu alone he likes gymnastics, you can't do them in jeanS
did u missthe obvious booty tho wtf
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User-2018225d In reply to BabanIllustration [2016-12-08 02:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Yah I miss it I was focused on your exploitation of colored peopl smh literally shaking rn
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